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ik this shit aint on par w/ the rest of you guys but im still mad toy. but i did it for a good cause called invisible children...look it up...its a sad ass story :(

 

i doubt anybody else on this forum is going to bother to provide you with helpful feedback, so i will.

 

this looks like a sloppy mess. you need to work on the consistency of your thickness, and you need to have a consistency for how much letters will overlap each other too. too much overlap is not good. too little and your letters could end up looking spaced out.

 

i would spend more time doing really broken down, simple letters before doing anything you could call "bubble" if you know what i mean. develop structure! do this until you can do it with your eyes closed. the nuances of your production will reveal themselves to you, you capitalize on them, and develop style!

 

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