mind617 Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 not pretty but w/e i wanted to contribute Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
setokeno Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 Dope! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C"mon Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 yeah nice..!!..C"mon everybody stop justified yourself on every fn pic:) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrawFish914 Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 [/url] TheBlackbooks.tk Some more work but,....you're on the way bro Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SNOe.One Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 thx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rakse Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 Mynd all your shit hench, lm loving it all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mind617 Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 yeah nice..!!..C"mon everybody stop justified yourself on every fn pic:) i know what ya mean man...just where im from a throw like that can be considered a lil gimmikly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mind617 Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 damn man, good looks kid...n the rest of yall too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dubizm Posted June 3, 2010 Share Posted June 3, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mind617 Posted June 3, 2010 Share Posted June 3, 2010 thats perrrrrrty Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kane_Slew_Able Posted June 4, 2010 Share Posted June 4, 2010 I dont like the L any suggestions? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RESTORIZE2 Posted June 4, 2010 Share Posted June 4, 2010 didnnt know it was an L thought i was a W Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MellowDrone Posted June 4, 2010 Share Posted June 4, 2010 i thought the H was a M Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rakse Posted June 4, 2010 Share Posted June 4, 2010 im reading MAWF Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted June 4, 2010 Share Posted June 4, 2010 the a and the f are the only ones id keep... the l is wtf and the h does somewhat look like an m.... ..def take out the bump in the L though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzed...uk Posted June 4, 2010 Share Posted June 4, 2010 i know its shit but im practising my throwies any crits Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MellowDrone Posted June 5, 2010 Share Posted June 5, 2010 avoid all that negative space, and go more simple on your letters. also, try not to make one part of the letter pointy, and one part bubbly. makes it look unbalanced. keep practicing, ive seen way worse. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzed...uk Posted June 5, 2010 Share Posted June 5, 2010 ok thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPEAKBTK Posted June 6, 2010 Share Posted June 6, 2010 crits on my throw? I know it's not the best, lookin to improve Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
esar71 Posted June 6, 2010 Share Posted June 6, 2010 avoid all that negative space, and go more simple on your letters. also, try not to make one part of the letter pointy, and one part bubbly. makes it look unbalanced. keep practicing, ive seen way worse. Well put . One thing I have always avoided ,and thought looked bad was combining styles. You gotta have one flow for it to pop. Lots of people don't always follow that rule though. You see throwies with 2 bubble letters and one pointed or whatever.I have also seen way worse ,keep trying different changes , You will know when your their. Sometimes I will get a new style going and it will work and be consistent , but I know I can get it better and will change and modify it for months until one day it clicks. But when it does I always feel it and say to myself thats it thats how you rock it. I think you should always stick with either upper or lower case letters as well , yet that is done often also. just my personal preference though. You'll get it.71 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
esar71 Posted June 6, 2010 Share Posted June 6, 2010 Also not too bad. Work on getting it clean and crisp. The one thing that jumps at me is keep your letters all doing the same thing . Lean them back or keep them straight.The s and e are leaning back and the p and the a are pretty much straight and the top half of the k is leaning forward , which conflicts with the others going back. In my opinion the most important golden rule in style, is weight and depiction . How you name lie's . How big you make the hole in the a let's say if you go small it makes the letter look stronger big and it looks thinner, and so on. Try to have everything match . Letter size, your start point, and the angled or straight set up. Keep practicing..71 also if you make holes go all hole ,or all slashes . The s ,e ,and k have no holes just lines making there form ,so I would just put a slash in the a and p .. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCOER Posted June 6, 2010 Share Posted June 6, 2010 write enough? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPEAKBTK Posted June 6, 2010 Share Posted June 6, 2010 thanks for the crits, Is this better or worse? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeathenLocklear Posted June 7, 2010 Share Posted June 7, 2010 fuckin around with more simple stuff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
el aspirador Posted June 7, 2010 Share Posted June 7, 2010 HAHAHAHA lol looks sick it kinda looks like a puzzle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thatonedude Posted June 7, 2010 Share Posted June 7, 2010 ^trooth! lmao... Also, fuze, painty throws are horrible, I haven't ever seen more than like maybe three that were worth a shit. Match the sides, simplify, try a one-liner, that shit is ill, the name has potential.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thatonedude Posted June 7, 2010 Share Posted June 7, 2010 *Pointy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
setokeno Posted June 7, 2010 Share Posted June 7, 2010 HeathenLocklear fucking dope! like that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoIll. Posted June 7, 2010 Share Posted June 7, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAN-KILLER Posted June 8, 2010 Share Posted June 8, 2010 nice im not really feelin the a but all in all a pretty solid toss Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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