Monkeywrenchgang Posted October 15, 2004 Share Posted October 15, 2004 i suck at poetry. This is for a project i have due next week. any critiques good or bad appreciated. Black Magic seems like freedom Black Magic sir? check please Black Magic the power of plastic Black Magic convenience! low interest! total security! new mini card! buy!buy!buy! Black Magic hangs us slowly Capitalist Magic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimsøn Posted October 15, 2004 Share Posted October 15, 2004 Black Magic Smells like poo-poo Black Magic Go buy a yoohoo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pfffffffffft Posted October 15, 2004 Share Posted October 15, 2004 totally racist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ckit Posted October 16, 2004 Share Posted October 16, 2004 black magic like little bunny foo foo walking around in a dress thats see thru Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vanity Posted October 16, 2004 Share Posted October 16, 2004 sounds like the hook for a prince song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pistol Posted October 16, 2004 Share Posted October 16, 2004 at quick glance I thought it said black cocks purple heads. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ledzep Posted October 16, 2004 Share Posted October 16, 2004 african american magic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fermentor666 Posted October 16, 2004 Share Posted October 16, 2004 Black velvet and that little boy's smile Black velvet with that slow southern style A new religion that'll bring ya to your knees Black velvet if you please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Casual T. Posted October 17, 2004 Share Posted October 17, 2004 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
test pattern Posted October 17, 2004 Share Posted October 17, 2004 i think posting good or bad poetry with good or bad intention in channel zero is the worst idea ever the ratio of people who could even appreciate poetry to those who can't is fairly obvious THE ODDS ARE AGAINST YOU, SIR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Moaner Posted October 18, 2004 Share Posted October 18, 2004 speaking of black magic...the new Mountain Dew Pitch Black is magic like a cock in a fucking bottle! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kr430n5_666 Posted October 18, 2004 Share Posted October 18, 2004 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
duh-rye-won Posted October 18, 2004 Share Posted October 18, 2004 Originally posted by Da Moaner@Oct 18 2004, 03:35 AM speaking of black magic...the new Mountain Dew Pitch Black is magic like a cock in a fucking bottle! Quoted post A. You would like to be able to obtain "cock in a fucking bottle", and to do so, would be a magical experience. drinking Mountain Dew Pitch Black rivals this bottled cock discovery in magical-ness. B. You find this beverage to be so distasteful that you compare it to the magical occurence of finding cocks in bottles, which you would find distasteful. please clarify. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weapon X Posted October 18, 2004 Share Posted October 18, 2004 Originally posted by fermentor666@Oct 16 2004, 06:40 PM Black velvet and that little boy's smile Black velvet with that slow southern style A new religion that'll bring ya to your knees Black velvet if you please Quoted post That's what I thought, too, after reading the poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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