Stanly_parker Posted April 10, 2007 Share Posted April 10, 2007 i know it aint a sketch but i need some crits... ................................................. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted April 10, 2007 Share Posted April 10, 2007 hey CRAZ-E, i'm just curious --how old are you? don't take this as an offensive question --i'm honestly curious when i ask this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted April 10, 2007 Share Posted April 10, 2007 stanley, that piece isn't horrible or anything, but could use a little more style. your can control isn't bad. you should just work on your letter structure now. i suck with fucking cans, so i shouldn't even come on here telling anyone shit --but you asked, so i figured i'd fart in a bag and send it your way. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Craz-E Posted April 10, 2007 Share Posted April 10, 2007 hey CRAZ-E, i'm just curious --how old are you? don't take this as an offensive question --i'm honestly curious when i ask this. 1-5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
movementsmagazine Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my nine rides shotgun Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 revok bite? i wouldn't say revok bite_ and if it is, not a good one. you've got basic letter structure down_ ||your cracks are whack as fuck, and don't use to many ||the fill ins have too much going on 'craze' start simple, you're garbage_ practice with straight letters_ bend them, give them some funk. add 3-d or drop shadow, and you'll be on your way. 'are you read' no_ no i'm not. 'dfek' you're definately on your way_ but go simpler. don't try to do many wildstyles. all those little things youve got banging off and squiggles and arrows are pretty whack for now. 'gimp' the letter structure is okay_ don't duck the dot of the 'I' behind the other letters. and don't try to connect everything like that. 'KTE' the shitty quality can't hide the shitty lettering 'CNUE' don't do that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amsone Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 crits would be appriciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
life WDS Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 nice cnue, fresh colors too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ALERT NZ Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 another one...please dont comment on the handstyle haha, i really need to work on that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Craz-E Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 of course im garbage ive been doing this less than a week Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Q666 Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 any suggestions with sharpie use...i mean how u guys color in...? cuz thats wats been annoying me fills..it ususally looks better when i dont color it.. since they bleed so much u have to compensate for the bleeding by either having better sketchpad paper or by carefully coloring to make up for bleeding or by using better markers :-p make sure your hand is steady but actually sometimes i will just use a thin sharpie to outline and ill use some cheapo markers like crayolas to do the fill they actually are not as bad as u might think also when u are filling make sure u color it in the same motions so it doesnt look blotchy for example this was done with thin sharpie for outline, crayola markers for fill (CHERRY SCENTED BIOTCHES) and i just used a white colored pencil for the white hilites not sure if my advice was any help but i tried Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ALERT NZ Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 wow thanks, thats actually a really good tip. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Craz-E Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 hahah i know im gettin blasted for this one but i was puttin off homework Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
life WDS Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 ALERT, MASOE... comin with the freshness Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
look_at_me Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 werd to crayola markers. the good thing about them is they dont bleed AT ALL! its just a little hard to get a fill without massive streak lines, plus they make the page all wet and soggy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marko Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 well it doesnt really matter what markers you use...it just depends on how well you use them. oh and freaknyc im liking the sev exchang but i didnt like on the bottom part of the "E" were it goes from thin to really thin then thicker and a skecth i did at school can i get critism Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SupaCola Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 Old shit, new colours.... give crits if u please. peace. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 not sure if my advice was any help but i tried i don't know if it helped anyone else, but it helped me. i never would of thought to use a white pencil. that piece is real nice by the way. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 MAZ --that school room sketch is nice man. i'm going to work on something for you after i write this shit. CNUE --i like that last post, nice work in the 3D. i also like your handstyle. the whole stay high halo works well with it, real nice retro feel to it. SUPA --you've got markers down pretty good. i like that piece, but for some reason, i feel like it needs a background. also, seeing that you like characters --you should start getting involved in the sticker game. i think you'll have fun with that shit. go buy a box of full sheet adhesive paper at office max. draw your shit on there, cut them out --and look, you've got a sticker. have fun man. CRAZ E --you're young man, not A young MAN --just straight fucking young. your short guys are still fresh. get a hold of them, realize what you're putting down on that paper man. my only crit for you is to start studying graff, and grab a good grasp on what the style of letters, characters, techniques, cultures (global styles differ) all mean --stick your fucking dick in this shit and fuck the hell out of it before you sit down and work on shaky ass pencil letters. get influenced by those ahead of you, and go from there. steady your line, don't push down so hard --you're not retarded are you? i hope not, but only retards kung fu grip a pencil and scribble that fucking hard. use light lines on that paper, draw an idea of what you want to do, then go in and thicken your lines. take simple letters, start there (FUCK!!!!), learn how to do block letters. once you get that down, we (the thread) can start to help you out. WEASE --i think you and CRAZ E should do a trade. i'm serious here. he's just starting out, you're just starting out, i think it would be a good excercise for both of you. both do simples. CRAZ E. wease just started in here as well CRAZ. she's got you beat though, so up your fucking game and trade with her. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slug-o Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 hey remeber when the toy forums were actually for toys.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joewinmor Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 Some handstyle/throwups ive been messing around with... Shitty pics, but comments? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
porchmonkey Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 Some handstyle/throwups ive been messing around with... Shitty pics, but comments? work on making them clean and simpler before you try complicated you might see people using crazy designs but honestly your not ready for tha yet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joewinmor Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 work on making them clean and simpler before you try complicated you might see people using crazy designs but honestly your not ready for tha yet They are a lot more legible than they look, and i have been doing simple stuff for a while, so maybe im just doing things wrong. any suggestions? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NayS Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 Joewinmor that first one is fresh, i like it. but i aint feeling that second one that much, just keep working on it though ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 hey remeber when the toy forums were actually for toys.... i don't. when i came in here, it was like this. i figure it's like a toy support group in here. kind of like a twelve step program for the retarded kids of graffiti. hey, don't anyone get pissed --i post in here as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joewinmor Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 program for the retarded kids of graffiti haha. maybe newbies? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 alright MAZ, i've got your shit done. i took some photos to show the progression of it. first photo was the outline. i did it with pencil, then went over it with a 01 micron pen. then i made that outline thicker with an 03 micron. then i finished it with details using a .005 micron. oh yeah, i gave your letters leprosy. sorry. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joewinmor Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 Thats sick Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 oh yeah, crits are always welcome. i might do more to it at some point in time --but i worked a 12 hour day, and i need some mother fucking sleep. edit: thanks joewinmor, glad you like it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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