Hitch14 Posted December 11, 2005 Share Posted December 11, 2005 criticism/comments/tips are appreciated Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melo -btk Posted December 11, 2005 Share Posted December 11, 2005 Originally posted by edogg@Dec 10 2005, 01:51 PM not cool fucker, i did that shit for a battle tourney over the summer. you didnt even try... Quoted post you should be proud man, bitin is the ultimate compliment Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jank Posted December 11, 2005 Share Posted December 11, 2005 er.. is all this biting shit directed at me? if it is, cool, i didnt bite so do wat u like... if not...never mind! hitch i like the characters...super mario all the way! the piece aint too bad atm..the pointed left hand side of the C doesnt really work.. i wud make it rounded or sumit.. keep workin it'l get better... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrooveChampion Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 Here is a dump of some of the shit i have been working on, trying to get the chops down before I commit to a good wall. The last comment i got said that i had good coloring but bad letter form. I was wondering if someone could perhaps expand on that? what exactly does "work on your letter structure mean?? can someone post a good example of what good letter structure is??? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edogg Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 ^^^not working, and jank: no the biting comments are not directed at you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flavicon Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 Yo GrooveChampion When I say letter structure I mean exactly that, the fundamental shapes that compose the letters. Notice the example below by Kem5. The letters are funky, yet have a natural flow to them. Also, each individual letter shape compliments the next. Does that help at all? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrooveChampion Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 Originally posted by Flavicon@Dec 11 2005, 09:00 PM Yo GrooveChampion When I say letter structure I mean exactly that, the fundamental shapes that compose the letters. Notice the example below by Kem5. The letters are funky, yet have a natural flow to them. Also, each individual letter shape compliments the next. Does that help at all? Quoted post Ok i sort of get what you are talking about, is there anyone of mine that shows something like that?? I mean which one has the best letter structure? so i know what to work with, is it like using one font? should all the letters follow the same format? what im trying to say is for example is it like of i am using MS word how all the font looks the same? it should have some similarity betweeen letters? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EKSOxo Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 look at my stuff the letters is what it is b is. a B not a wierd ass shape make the letters what they are Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrooveChampion Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 also where can i fond more of that guys work, thats some hot shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flavicon Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 It is kinda like using one font. But each letter doesn't need to follow the exact same proportions like alot of typography does obviously. Unless you want them too. But each letter should certainly influence one another. Another example: Each letter has different colors, textures, frills, and doodads, but the underlying structer is what really makes it fresh. Each letter relates to the next creating an aesthetically consistent whole Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flavicon Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 Here's the Kem5 thread and if you like him you'll probably like Ges, who is another 3A cat. Ges Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edogg Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 oooh hey there ekso. nice to see you again. faggot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EKSOxo Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 Originally posted by edogg@Dec 11 2005, 10:03 PM oooh hey there ekso. nice to see you again. faggot. Quoted post no time for beef kid Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edogg Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 huh? wait, what was that? you fucked yourself over and im not trying to start shit, you started the shit yourself by biting my peice without even trying to hide it. im just making sure you know you're queer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EKSOxo Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 what did i bite besides ya moms tittys? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melo -btk Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 Originally posted by EKSOxo@Dec 11 2005, 10:39 PM what did i bite besides ya moms tittys? Quoted post HIS PIECE YOU IDIOT Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EKSOxo Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 where Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edogg Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 HER peice to be exact, i hope that doesnt piss you of more that you were schooled by a girl... now mr. big man enko stop tryin to act tough. nows not the time to try and prove youre balls. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EKSOxo Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 that ugly focus shit HAHHAHAHA U DUMB FUCK CAN U READ ENKO ONE AND EKSOXO IS 2 DIFFRENT PEOPLE U STUPID FUCKING IDIOTS HAHHAHAHHAHHA Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EKSOxo Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 fucking idiot can u guys read? get off my nuts bitch Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edogg Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 hAHAha i will admit i fucked up there. but thats funny shit. ive been waitin for a while for this toy to show his face again so now i'll step up and apologize. i owe you one. its funny shit though, nah i know you aint a toy ass biter. enko is another story. my apologies. i got a little ahead of myself. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edogg Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 damn dont get heated about this. its an honest mistake and a funny one at that. i guess you can be pissed if you want but youre aight and i know that. im apologizing so just try and see the lighter side. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ENKO ONE Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 life goes on... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jank Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 ah now that was all fun... wel not really, but wateva floas ur boat i ges... 'hand car wash production' we did yestaday whole thingL one bit: characters: my section: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 FEELING IT JANK !! ENKO GOT CAUGHT OUT LIKE EVERY MOTHER FUCKING TOY SHOULD B YOUR LIFE WONT GO ANY WHERE U KEEP UP THAT BITING SHIT Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackFlux Posted December 13, 2005 Share Posted December 13, 2005 @Jank, good shit homie, however, the "Hand Car Wash" letters don't fit with that the rest of the letters _________________________________ Sketched > Illustrator > Photoshop Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trav-o s Posted December 13, 2005 Share Posted December 13, 2005 wOW, flux... now that u got teh shapes, styalize em Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
segway Posted December 13, 2005 Share Posted December 13, 2005 dont get so haughty there vare, the sketches you post are still toy, you havent been biting, and youve gone nowhere Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackFlux Posted December 13, 2005 Share Posted December 13, 2005 thanks trav-o, still trying to find my style, not ready to freak (color) it yet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrooveHolmes Posted December 13, 2005 Share Posted December 13, 2005 Birds are cool, I got bored. Cheap Cheap Cheap? :chicken: [attachmentid=25894] If anyone has any comments or suggestion gimme some critisism...and I just didn't want to bust out markers at the time... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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