skeetfunk Posted June 15, 2011 Share Posted June 15, 2011 not really .. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted June 15, 2011 Share Posted June 15, 2011 Dope. Diggin the 3D the most. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thisisastupidusername Posted June 15, 2011 Share Posted June 15, 2011 I like it except the a. Don't have thet point in the middle period or at least let it touch that verticle bar What do you mean :confused: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted June 15, 2011 Share Posted June 15, 2011 H This is what I meant. So I tried to copy your letters. Not much effort into trying haha. Lazyness no diss. Anywho the first sketch on the top left is yours basically and I crossed out the point. Then drew it without the point. Then with but see how ir touches? And the filled pink one I was just fuckin around, and then some handy boys. So did I clear it up? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted June 15, 2011 Share Posted June 15, 2011 yeah looks better without point, you look like you need to so SIMPLES for a bit. Keyboard straight letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thisisastupidusername Posted June 15, 2011 Share Posted June 15, 2011 i get it now, thanks dude Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted June 15, 2011 Share Posted June 15, 2011 Yep. Hope it helps. I think the v is dope as is. Maybe play with height of the bars. Fuck with a simple A like teetas said Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted June 15, 2011 Share Posted June 15, 2011 some characters im colouring tonight in illustrator and photoshop. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miahsix Posted June 16, 2011 Share Posted June 16, 2011 for the "Official toy battle thread" -- http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120030&page=170 wang by miahsix, on Flickr for the "Alpha-Battle!!" thread -- http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/showthread.php?t=138054&page=26 m by miahsix, on Flickr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 16, 2011 Share Posted June 16, 2011 doing it wrong. you need to be practicin the handstyle more than anything else, just because it's a handstyle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted June 16, 2011 Share Posted June 16, 2011 agreed..that shits ugly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pedophilism Posted June 16, 2011 Share Posted June 16, 2011 That handstyle is copied and pasted on everything you've drawn? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miahsix Posted June 16, 2011 Share Posted June 16, 2011 haha yeah, it's just a watermark. I don't post any handstyles or throws Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted June 16, 2011 Share Posted June 16, 2011 why not just write it every time? it can only get better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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n30n b0n35 Posted June 16, 2011 Share Posted June 16, 2011 Did this for a buddy over on Devart Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaltLiquorJunior Posted June 16, 2011 Share Posted June 16, 2011 ^ nice... i think the top A bar shouldnt overlap like that cuz the S doesnt do it... and im sure u were going for the symetrical look :) couple random shits... this sketch was easily from 5 months ago but is one of my favorite little things... the JU in my opinion looks sick but i doubt i could finish it without fucking it up... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 eh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 eh im not sure how i feel. i know the S is ugly as fuck. someone gimme some critisizm or advice or what not Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 Shorten the top bar of the s. That's the major problem imo. Something to think about would be how the top bars of your letters go up, down, up, down from right to left whereas the bottom bars all go up if ya catch my drift, id say either make the top ant bottom bars parrallel on eith individual letter or alternate em. Or just one letter like DOS all go up but E goes down. A couple more things that bother me is where the vertical bar of the E touches the D, and with the bottom bar of the E extending under the D it looks like a mistake so I recomend adding a little angled line to the vertical bar of the E like you did to the D just to show they're two different bars. With the top bar of the d and o, how they both extend past the left verticle bars, but the bottom line of where they extend and basically the top line of the wholes don't line up. I think they should just to keep the flow of the bars. And the serifs or whatever you want to call them on the de and s should either be longer up the bar or shorter. And your shadow is off. Its not easy to get it just right but it ain't hard to make it nice. Because basically your shadow will have the same length of every line as the original letters and usuallythe same distance. Now I'm not saying that's it period because you can fuck with a shadow in any way it just needs to be consistent. If you have paint go play on it real talk. Make one text thing in a color and another in black. Select the blue one only and drag it over and around the black. There's your basic shadow technique right there. Sorry for the book, just my thoughts. Happy to post pics to further explain or just explain more if needed. Hope it helps ya Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 thank you for the advice. i could respond to everything you said with something but i wont. i kind of understood most of it, a little drunk. ill try to comprehend it better tomorrow and keep it in mind Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 Thx for the advice JR. I totally get you on the A. It was a case of finishing the piece and instantly not being happy with it. I spray painted the page first and for some reason its impossible to rub out pencil lines if you fuck up so i kinda had to roll with something i wasnt 100% with. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miahsix Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 for the "Official Battle Thread" -- http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/showthread.php?t=81991&page=934 Liquid Cooled Curls by miahsix, on Flickr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 God I don't wanna do that word for the battle haha. Nice entry though. 3d is dope. Check out eaz on youtube ant watch him color. I think if you colored it better it'd be way more three dementional. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miahsix Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 wow that guy is amazing, thanks for the suggestion ... yeah that word sucks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noone57 Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 haven't posted in a while Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sik-TwentyFo Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 Lovin your 3d and idea's Miah Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 miah the 3d idea looks good, but your letters are lacking especially that S at the end. noone....you def. need moar arrowz. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miahsix Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 Lovin your 3d and idea's Miah thanks dude! :) miah the 3d idea looks good, but your letters are lacking especially that S at the end. noone....you def. need moar arrowz. yeah, I need to work on my letters and start pushing em, I always play it way to safe :( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 Nah, i think you should go "safer" and just do regular block letters with that 3D style, would look dope. i don't think you're ready to move on from simples yet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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