MaltLiquorJunior Posted June 6, 2011 Share Posted June 6, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted June 6, 2011 Share Posted June 6, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted June 6, 2011 Share Posted June 6, 2011 That dupe is lookin better crwpwns. The whole in the p should be a tad bigger. Keep sketchin homie shits def gettin better. And bump deos. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KADE_ONE Posted June 6, 2011 Share Posted June 6, 2011 saon help me out on this one but i dont know about the D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted June 6, 2011 Share Posted June 6, 2011 Working with the shapes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
"RedlucifeR" Posted June 6, 2011 Share Posted June 6, 2011 Hey guys,This is my first attempt at using color pencils.I decided id start at using simple structures and progress from there.But compared to my last attempt at graffiti "somewhere below".What do you think? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
"RedlucifeR" Posted June 6, 2011 Share Posted June 6, 2011 Hey guys,This is my first attempt at using color pencils.I decided id start at using simple structures and progress from there.But compared to my last attempt at graffiti "somewhere below".What do you think? Lol,And sorry about image quality. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KADE_ONE Posted June 6, 2011 Share Posted June 6, 2011 no need for a quote Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted June 6, 2011 Share Posted June 6, 2011 kade- you should have made your d's loop like you did to your R..it would look better i think..try it out maybe idk Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted June 6, 2011 Share Posted June 6, 2011 dont call it a comeback Uploaded with ImageShack.us Uploaded with ImageShack.us Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted June 6, 2011 Share Posted June 6, 2011 saon help me out on this one but i dont know about the D ahh, the d looks like an O, make the angle of the bottomt the same as the E, and also i dont like the middle bar of the E its out of place. Other then that, i dig this its tight. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miahsix Posted June 6, 2011 Share Posted June 6, 2011 A couple I did a while back miah by miahsix, on Flickr miah by miahsix, on Flickr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 miah, nice. graceful. you don 't need those gimmicks though. simpler is better at this point. cola, don't worry, we didn't call it a comeback, since no one noticed you the 1st time around. that shit sloppy. kay, don't worry about pencils yet. worry about bars. skinny middle bar of A should be reminiscent of middle bar of Y and bar of K (which should be 1 bar). yokai, as always, yr shits coming along nicely. sneek, that's pretty nice. i know you want to fit that E with the T, but that bit is looking a little weird. if my drunken crits piss you off, call !-800-eat-dick Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 hahaha suck a dick homie I BEEN HERE FO YEARS playin my peers and putting suckas in fear or whatever im drunk too but youre coming across as a dick man A DICK thats my crit for your crit\ and your goddamn behavior in general Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 not a fan of the fill but at 3 fuckin am i cannot think of a better one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miahsix Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 for the "official toy battle thread" http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120030&page=168 private by miahsix, on Flickr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaltLiquorJunior Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 I like that... alot actually... Keep up the good work... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 Things i like, things i dont like. Wanted to go big on the first page of my new book. All opinions/crits welcome. Also, i did a progress picture on my devart page if anyone wants to see my process and crit that lol http://n30n-b0n35.deviantart.com/#/d3i9vx5 hit that link ^^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cNeeK Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 looks good bro, nice way to start up a new book. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sik-TwentyFo Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 2 Dies Private Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giml75 Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 My entry for the toy battle. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 Good shit neon. Go paint that boy homie! And miah that private is nice, I just think that the 3d would have complimented the piece more if all the letters leaned one way. But I like what you did with the double lean thing slot. Makes it interesting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 Giml that shit is looking miles better homie! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cNeeK Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miahsix Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 thanks spawn, I was totally thinking the same thing about half way into coloring it (i was like, o.O shit, lol) i appreciate the crit for sure man couple more I did a while back miah by miahsix, on Flickr hope by miahsix, on Flickr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sik-TwentyFo Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 2 Dies Private bottom of page bump. any crits 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 you're fuckin killin it man! for real! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 crits? learn the understanding of the term 'flow', and make your letters have it. But not bad overall, has potential. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 My entry for the toy battle. Your hiding too much of your letters by not making them stand up straight. Go simpler and more consistent, thats the key to making an impact with simples. Also, practice practice practice, the more simples you do the sooner you can move on. Construct your letters with bars and it all starts to fall into place. When i say bars i mean straight, un-wobbly, consistent bars. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noe4sbc Posted June 8, 2011 Share Posted June 8, 2011 i dont know where to post so fux it ima post here i gues.... 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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