Sevage Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 crits? You understand 3d very well, try playing with the vanishing point just for the fun of it...ie: make it to the top right of the page instead of right in the middle of the piece your letters have zero flow or style personally I would say screw colors for awhile and do a shit ton of sketches of just letters first it looks like you understand letter structure really well, so use the blocks for the letters and extend them a bit, bend them, or play with them however you want I did a sketch to show phony what I mean, hopefully it helps Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 Ruck, rather than trying extensions, try getting the letters to merge into themselves a bit more, at the moment you have nice letters but they are 4 individual letters, just try to get the letters to connect with each other and flow into each other. Or break the letters down a bit more, there is nothing to say the R has to be a solid R it could be made up of 2 parts like the upright and the curve, just break the letters down a bit Okie doke, i'll keep tweaking my letters, this is the style of letters i'm running with at the moment, most potential for using extensions I think, Well so far that I have found in my designs. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 its getting there Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sech Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 Sech, if thats an S its a pretty dope S but the loop extension makes it look like an O yep it's a S. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 kinda screwed up on 3d, and tried some new stuff like you guys suggested..crits? looked better before i put the green in the letters =/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 try different fonts out...go to ms word and make a font bold and size big and try mimicing em... for the one u posted, the extensions have an extra bit that seems to go into the letters, it looks awkard on this one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 don;t bother with colour for awhile, just sticl to pencil and ink outlines for awhile. but you are heading in the right direction, trey what freak sad. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ome Depot Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 ya fucked it up...its supposed to be the font Andalus. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 decent first attempt zen. it's good to see you trying to progress naturally as opposed to most who jump the gun and try to get super complex a few years too soon. keep at it man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuco Salamanca Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 zen: I like the style, but you need more steadiness with the pen. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 god i cannot get this down, bookman old style. ik =/ i think its becaue im lookin at the screen and unsure of the lines and whatnot... =/ im a lot more confident w/ simples haha but then everyone is. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sevage Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 that looks much better I whipped this up befor I saw that last post... I was basically just going to say when copying fonts, make sure you learn the letter structure ie the blocks that make the letter then just play with them...hope this helps Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sevage Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 And an S pimped out to maybe give you some ideas of crap you can do to the letters Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 Ruckus: not bad, man. It's definitely got an even flow to it. Saph: I think what you got going on would make a good throwie. You should do another in just black & white. Zen: You're getting it. Sometimes the simpler the letter structure is, the harder it is to make it look good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 Some of Cruiser's latest work, I know it ain't perfect, but whatevs. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 those are ill, i just don't like how you wrote death of time on tha 2nd one. it's like you just wanted to hurry up and be done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HtotheK Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 those are ill, i just don't like how you wrote death of time on tha 2nd one. it's like you just wanted to hurry up and be done. Agreed he even drawed a stopwatch :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 cruise try working on other letters/exchanges itll help u experiment and develop ur style further. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 tried this when i first woke up, didnt realize how bad it was till i actually woke up. (gungshuche font) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 thats good zen..being able to pick up on your own mistakes is really important...im liking the direction that ur heading in as well.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HtotheK Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 Had a couple of those thought I had drawed the sickest piece ever, but the day after I almost felt ashamed of what I had accompished :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 zen, those handstyles need to be calmed down too, just go for simple and clean and they'll look much better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 Thanks yall. I forgot to mention that character and the "Disciples Of Time" weren't done by me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 ill post some more later, i just got some cheap paint, old plywood, and a mask so i wanna go work on some can control, thanks for the feedback guys its really helpin Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sevage Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 Hah yup that happens to me almost every sketch Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 :lol: ! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 well my can control sucks, id post wat i did but id be too embarrsed lol im workin on some sketches though ill post later. (any one else notice, theres only like three different types of fonts?) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pew_Pew_Pew Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 crits plz bump for crits plz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 its pretty decent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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