saltine Posted October 14, 2010 Share Posted October 14, 2010 good looks hit me up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted October 14, 2010 Share Posted October 14, 2010 haha, that goes is dope, the luro is pretty good for 1st complex one, i could show some of my wifes old "attempts", but she'd find it probably and that wouldnt be good haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saltine Posted October 14, 2010 Share Posted October 14, 2010 haha women are sneaky like that they always find out ya she does simples and whatnot but never tried with the arrows and extentions and all that cool stuff im pretty happy with the way both of them came out thanks for the props guys Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted October 14, 2010 Share Posted October 14, 2010 lol word, that luro could be much much worse. She needs to work on width consistency for bars more, but her extewnsions seem to be filling in negative space n what not. and some of the addons could have been refined. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuco Salamanca Posted October 14, 2010 Share Posted October 14, 2010 nah just found that picture mildly entertaining... saltine: I like the left one better. It looks more balanced Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted October 14, 2010 Share Posted October 14, 2010 just got into a major fight with my gf, probably soon to be ex..., couldnt really focus on these but thought id post em and see what you thought. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted October 14, 2010 Share Posted October 14, 2010 Looking for criticism on my letter structure Post a a-z :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted October 14, 2010 Share Posted October 14, 2010 K IS FOR KILOZ! nice K Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted October 14, 2010 Share Posted October 14, 2010 crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 zen much better simple dude....keep it up. try differnt letters for more practice..exchaneg with ppl..and slowly youll eventually end up developing ur own style. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 quickly done halloween themed =/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saltine Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 idk if i posted this i dont think so CRUISE i started yours i just need some color Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pos Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 zen is the new PHONY with less style. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 lo i just started...so im missin style.....i guess? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 goes get off tha toy thread son!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 dope color scheme on that last one zen. it's that time of tha year when purple, orange and, black come out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saltine Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 lo i just started...so im missin style.....i guess? its all good homie everyone starts somewhere start adding variation to your letters you are just droppin the same outline i know ppl said keep it simple so do that just add a little more to it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 thanks man, i thought they would fit in now i just didnt know what else to add to it so i just left it like that...thought id over done bubbles on everything else. and ight ill give a shot on my next piece Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saltine Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 goes get off tha toy thread son!! haha good looks mang Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iTz PaYBacK Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 idk if i posted this i dont think so CRUISE i started yours i just need some color im digging this piece a lot man. it has a good flow to it, and a great color scheme just check the 3d in a few places other than that its fucking golden Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skeetfunk Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 for my friends bday fucked up on the 3d crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skeetfunk Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 also shit ive painted please crit thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iTz PaYBacK Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 rewt... you are making some of the common mistakes that everyone does when they start out take a look back through this thread and the toy paint thread a lot of people have given great advice over the years to people just like you please read through it..... other than your pieces needing major improvement, your throw and tag are a good start you have a good eye for color so stick with it man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 haha I tryded arrows Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 i like that. tha r and u are tight. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 Haha thanks, i kinda like it, but am not liking some of my extensions at the same time, more practice needed, but that's why i'm in the toy thread still. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 Ruck, rather than trying extensions, try getting the letters to merge into themselves a bit more, at the moment you have nice letters but they are 4 individual letters, just try to get the letters to connect with each other and flow into each other. Or break the letters down a bit more, there is nothing to say the R has to be a solid R it could be made up of 2 parts like the upright and the curve, just break the letters down a bit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sech Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pew_Pew_Pew Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 crits plz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sevage Posted October 15, 2010 Share Posted October 15, 2010 Sech, if thats an S its a pretty dope S but the loop extension makes it look like an O The Ruck is real nice, the extensions I don't like are top left on the R and top left of the K I feel like if you made them the same thickness and length as the other extensions it would look alot better... the placement of them seems pretty decent though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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