redeyedanimal Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 just because, yes i know this is a sketch thread. the last e is fucked, it's always a challenge to fit into the flow but make it different. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReSoN OnEr Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 cruiser, your U can use a little tweaking. it looks part of the leg of the R @reson: well, for the most part its unreadable. no letters are visible at all, and its inconsistent lol you really cant read it its pretty simple if u ask me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sharpies Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 just because, yes i know this is a sketch thread. the last e is fucked, it's always a challenge to fit into the flow but make it different. DIG IT! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sharpies Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 HEY ARNOLD. hahahaha got the first season. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 that handstyles reads "vek" to me, extend the left leg a bit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 keepin on the simples and working on structure, then ill get into the details and fills ... and heres a handy!! hahah any crits? sorry for bad flick camera phone at 4am haha :lol: That handy is ill to just be startin out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 ^agreed. bar out that handstyle and use it as a piece. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReSoN OnEr Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 the fill in was because their was a layer unde thaat i didnt want but it came out decent ( i tried to make it even simpler as told to me) this was a quick character while i was faded Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 you don't know what simples are. look at the SIMPLES AND STRAIGHTLETTERS thread in brickslayers. that shit looks awful man, i tried to be nice before, but you're not listening to people's advice. simplify, learn to use bars to build letters, and learn your color wheel. Learn letter structure and learn to build your own letters with your own style. Define your outlines, either in black or whatever color. drop ALL of the extensions, none of them flow with the piece. I can't tell if you're tryin to do a 3d or what. You got a lot of graffiti cliche shit on on that only really reputable heads can pull off without catching shit. You're not yet reputable. /wallofredtextoner. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 you have artistic talent it's just in tha early stages. i know you don't want to hear this but your working with a style thats a little over your head. go simple for now man. this advice may sound like bs everyone tells everyone else but it's true. your characters are hot tho. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sharpies Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 That handy is ill to just be startin out. Thankss! practicing pays off haha and @redeyed thats a good ideaaa haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 that's how it all starts man, let's see what you can do with it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReSoN OnEr Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 you don't know what simples are. look at the SIMPLES AND STRAIGHTLETTERS thread in brickslayers. that shit looks awful man, i tried to be nice before, but you're not listening to people's advice. simplify, learn to use bars to build letters, and learn your color wheel. Learn letter structure and learn to build your own letters with your own style. Define your outlines, either in black or whatever color. drop ALL of the extensions, none of them flow with the piece. I can't tell if you're tryin to do a 3d or what. You got a lot of graffiti cliche shit on on that only really reputable heads can pull off without catching shit. You're not yet reputable.[/color][/font][/size][/size] /wallofredtextoner. :lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 i meant what i said, but i apologize for the large red text. I was umad. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 red text for a red eye Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 As harsh as it sounds, it always has to be said, that SIMPLE piece that used to be thrown around in here should always be the top post of the page as a constant reminder. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juca Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 just because, yes i know this is a sketch thread. the last e is fucked, it's always a challenge to fit into the flow but make it different. i like it,good job,btw E looks good... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AWZK Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 bahh!.what up guys..fall is here. this is more of a drawing.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 awsk, the tags look ok, try building off of those instead of going in a completely different direction with your bubbly throw thing, i don't think you're ready to stray too far away from straights yet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DONTpanic1 Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 honestly i forgot theres a toy post here page, thts sad if ur actually admittn ur toy, im hater btw, jst give up kis,if u int wit it quit it, its kidslike u tht make it bad for us crossin out playas Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReSeM Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 honestly i forgot theres a toy post here page, thts sad if ur actually admittn ur toy, im hater btw, jst give up kis,if u int wit it quit it, its kidslike u tht make it bad for us crossin out playas teh fuck u talkin bout Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuco Salamanca Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 honestly i forgot theres a toy post here page, thts sad if ur actually admittn ur toy, im hater btw, jst give up kis,if u int wit it quit it, its kidslike u tht make it bad for us crossin out playas whetz yer tag broh? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 nek get those arrows out of there! and i'd oust the kick back on the bottom leg of the k and widen the e a little bit, other than that it's not too bad at all. the fill's pretty cool too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 ya after i finished it i regreted putting them there but thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
homsie Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 crits?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Talkofthatown919 Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 any help is appreciated on what i can improve and whatnot Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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