centrysams Posted January 14, 2012 Share Posted January 14, 2012 ^ thanks . but i got a lot of work to do befor i can go paint it . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
louislouis Posted January 14, 2012 Share Posted January 14, 2012 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted January 15, 2012 Share Posted January 15, 2012 Nice simple hands salem, keep at it and the style will start to flesh out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3rdEyE Posted January 15, 2012 Share Posted January 15, 2012 I used to write when I was younger. Just recently got back into it and am looking for some constructive criticism. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted January 16, 2012 Share Posted January 16, 2012 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
louislouis Posted January 16, 2012 Share Posted January 16, 2012 thanks yokai im liking your style but the letters seem a little crammed together. really clean darkeist. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted January 16, 2012 Share Posted January 16, 2012 thank you. on the bottom little bubble letter make the back leg of your R bigger and draw the O all the way..just keep drawing it it will improve. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrManiks Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 Constructive criticism appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torch21 Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 VoBeK battle....i need some crits Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sevage Posted January 19, 2012 Share Posted January 19, 2012 torch21: I think it would look better if it was a bit more consistent, meaning: Put the O and E and the same slant and same size. Shrink the E or make the O bigger. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
centrysams Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 that first blue deos is nice., were u from , deos were im to also Untitled by centrysams, on Flickr Untitled by centrysams, on Flickr exchange i did Untitled by centrysams, on Flickr Untitled by centrysams, on Flickr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 texas Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
centrysams Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 o kool . obv diff guy . ur style kool tho . do another one with the little hitch things in the bars thats nice . also like that last one i think the e would b better if it ust conected to the o instead of swirl . but still nice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
centrysams Posted January 21, 2012 Share Posted January 21, 2012 Untitled by centrysams, on Flickr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grizzystreets Posted January 21, 2012 Share Posted January 21, 2012 Constructive criticism appreciated. your n is the same as your k , not that it doesnt work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KWIKone Posted January 21, 2012 Share Posted January 21, 2012 crits? saze exchange Uploaded with ImageShack.us Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
centrysams Posted January 21, 2012 Share Posted January 21, 2012 ^nice . i like the 3d Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted January 21, 2012 Share Posted January 21, 2012 kwik, i dig the E. you probably noticed the lean on the A threw it off a little and created a weird spot of negative space. Humr, nice throws. i especially suck at throws. Deos, fuck with the top outline more. looks like a style that could develop into some crazy things. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted January 22, 2012 Share Posted January 22, 2012 some ugly shits i been working on, crits welcome Alibi by EdictOner, on Flickr[/img] Mask by EdictOner, on Flickr[/img] regrettable arrows, prob will fill it still Grits/Alibi by EdictOner, on Flickr[/img] http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7028/6738878663_fcdff26844.jpg' alt='6738878663_fcdff26844.jpg'> Grits by EdictOner, on Flickr[/img] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
centrysams Posted January 22, 2012 Share Posted January 22, 2012 some nice fills^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alfredzein Posted January 22, 2012 Share Posted January 22, 2012 Re: I like it topic Cheap Pharmacy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KWIKone Posted January 22, 2012 Share Posted January 22, 2012 Ali - those look nice. pretty cool fills and shadows. yeah i should of added something to where the negative space was to fill it up a bit. i cant do a piece without making a some of the letters lean lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted January 22, 2012 Share Posted January 22, 2012 baze work on maintaining equivalent letter width and heights. ie ur Z hieght is way smaller than ur B, and it is also wider. CONSISTENCY is the key. also work on spacing out your letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MN_Nice Posted January 23, 2012 Share Posted January 23, 2012 Whats happenin. New to the forum, been posting on BombingScience for a grip but wanna reach out more. Posting some stuff from older to newer. Crits are appreciated. Now I'm working on this one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tramp.stamp Posted January 23, 2012 Share Posted January 23, 2012 bump the 3rd pic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tramp.stamp Posted January 23, 2012 Share Posted January 23, 2012 bump the 3rd pic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted January 23, 2012 Share Posted January 23, 2012 any opinions? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
centrysams Posted January 23, 2012 Share Posted January 23, 2012 @mues ..those r solid peices . i like the page with 3 diff ones ,. nice work @yokai . i like it but i think it b better is O was bigger an move the a closer to a to close negitive space . if ya no wat i mean. still looks good , nice colors Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
centrysams Posted January 23, 2012 Share Posted January 23, 2012 Untitled by centrysams, on Flickr Untitled by centrysams, on Flickr @yokai wat kind of markers u use for that . must b some form of paint marker to go over the black. im assuming thats the cover of ur blackbook? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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