tramp.stamp Posted October 5, 2011 Share Posted October 5, 2011 http://i1141.photobucket.com/albums/n581/majoroner/Photo_00023.jpg[/img]"] post pics and let the criticism speak there. new shit i got bored on. not finished. crits? for add ons? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 A lot of potential there, tone down it down just a bit, and def work on the handstyle. Characters are cool too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Talkofthatown919 Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 Just some recent sketches I done. Still having problems with getting my J and O to flow right on the 2nd sketch was waiting till i got the 3d right to add it in. Also working on improving my hand style cause i feel it needs to be improved crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
515ZomB Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 Start of a new sketch. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 last two to post, simplify. It is very obvious that you are trying too hard to achieve above your skill level without the foundation of knowledge. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
515ZomB Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 Stop posting unless you're gonna give real critisism. If you think I'm trying to go above my skill level break it down and explain why. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 because if you push yourselves guys you might get hurt trying to progress and get better at something that doesnt look like a computer shat it out. joest thats not bad but make the j curve, itll add some flow homie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Talkofthatown919 Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 Aight cool preciate the help will definitely go simpler as suggested and curve my J's more often. Zomb redeye and others here actually do give helpful criticism if you listen to what they say and going simple helps you get a better foundation of letter structure and many other things Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
515ZomB Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 Aight cool preciate the help will definitely go simpler as suggested and curve my J's more often. Zomb redeye and others here actually do give helpful criticism if you listen to what they say and going simple helps you get a better foundation of letter structure and many other things Lol, apparently you don't see much of what Red types. He's less than helpful 90% of the time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
descone Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 went a little crazy with the colors on this one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cobber Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 Some criticism would be nice, cheers. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
515ZomB Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 Looks good but it seems like you're missing a lot of 3d. And this is the toy sketch thread. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tramp.stamp Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 i only like the colors. thats sketchy. no wonder its poster here. learn how to cut. feelin the handy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tramp.stamp Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 posted. and descone. what the fuck are you doing with that ass? some willy wonka lookin type shit. do some graff. fuck you doin? bullshittin.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skeetfunk Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 why is someone posting a picture of a poorly drawn ass shitting tears? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
515ZomB Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 ^ Sick straight letters. Only thing I don't like is that the S overlaps itself, it really throws the flow off IMO. Other than that shit looks nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RESTER_ONE Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 went a little crazy with the colors on this one. hahah just thought you would throw this back in the mix?! haha Lighted the mood on my end! good stuff...still 'booboo on the right cheek' Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
descone Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 aww still?^^ posted. and descone. what the fuck are you doing with that ass? some willy wonka lookin type shit. do some graff. fuck you doin? bullshittin.. that's what i write, call me booty sweat. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
descone Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 why is someone posting a picture of a poorly drawn ass shitting tears? it is sweat not tears. and can you tell me some tips or show me how you'd draw it? i like your style. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 Be mean 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
515ZomB Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 I like it Yokai. Decided I like the outline on this piece so I 3d'd it and colored. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 yo yokai, you've progressed a lot and i like the direction you're moving in... but i feel like the flow of your pieces would benefit a lot from you extending the upper right leg of the k from here. that's the only real problem i have with it and i think your burners would greatly benefit from the change. just sayin is all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 oh and dope shit mosk. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 i actually see what you did there now with the k and i like it a lot more now, but still think about what i said. @yokai Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a mutant rancor Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 what is this ass sweat?? zomb liked the sketch better with just the outline, the fill looks a little sloppy and maybe just one color or a fade dope simple mosk Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 Thx mass, been thinkin about changing up the K for a while but im drawn to that style of upper right bar lol. will see what i come up with. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skeetfunk Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 if i did draw it i wouldnt post it on a forum dedicated to letters Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 yeah man. i really think you're on the verge of moving up to the new sketch thread. @yokai Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
descone Posted October 6, 2011 Share Posted October 6, 2011 if i did draw it i wouldnt post it on a forum dedicated to letters guessin this was meant for me. ok it's cool, i'll have more new stuff up later. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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