ENKM Posted May 25, 2011 Share Posted May 25, 2011 yea get some non digital, put that up, hope it looks good as digital tho ;) 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted May 25, 2011 Share Posted May 25, 2011 woohoo i got rid of your tampon.../nerdpointoner 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rakse Posted May 25, 2011 Share Posted May 25, 2011 Nothing special man, ill do a better one next week just thought i should get something in. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaltLiquorJunior Posted May 25, 2011 Share Posted May 25, 2011 welcome soer... that first one looks real nice... post some sketched stuff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted May 25, 2011 Share Posted May 25, 2011 that top one is pretty hot soer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted May 25, 2011 Share Posted May 25, 2011 Nice one RAKSE, cool to see me letters, havent written them in long time, been super busy and i still wanna finish up a trade for SAON. I sort of miss the old YOKAI at this point lol. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soerpatchkids Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 going out sunday try to get some wall pics. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 ^good for you. We all care so much what your plans are. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 lolll, why not just take a pic of your sketches? since it is paper chase Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaltLiquorJunior Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 tried somthing a little fancier... kinda wack but watever... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DAYNR Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 nah.. your older style was alot better. on the last pics you posted the top one was really good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 A present for SAON. I am up to date on exchanges! expect some YOKAI work now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stayposi831 Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 that shits fucking bubbly!! nice man! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 For the toy battle. Says flake. Crits? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 I dont think i would be able to read it unless i knew what it said but im pretty toy. I like ure handstyle tho. something quick. Crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 def didn;t know it said flake until i read the text, that being said though, i can see it when i know what it says. The L is to back heavy, you could use an extension off the F to maintain the balance and keep the L within decent space. The Bottom loop extensions detract from the structure of the letters, if not for them i could have read the piece, i think. Your E needs to be simplified a little bit to get better flow. Looks retty good though, just throwing out crits randomly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 another flake 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 Thanks animal. Appreciate the crits. Will def keep that in mind. And neon that looks good but the vertical bar is doesn't fit the letters I think because its too straight. Give it more angle on one side. And erase the pencil and for the shadow darken it with marker. Idk its little shit that makes stuff asthetically look better and gives it more pop ya know Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 Ye the I is totally whacked out lol will give it some time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ENKM Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 ok so how much improvement does 12oz say this simp needs?? i just added some bars and some minor detail to my initial design :p i know it need work but im not sure on what parts exactly 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sik-TwentyFo Posted May 27, 2011 Share Posted May 27, 2011 Was tryin to see if i could pull off some good 3d, had to use my friends camera phone Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ENKM Posted May 27, 2011 Share Posted May 27, 2011 the R looks better not really feelin the C or K they need the most work in my opinion but a lot better than a week ago Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted May 27, 2011 Share Posted May 27, 2011 ENKM - not bad, the connector things look bad imo, and the bottom part of the k needs work but yeah, just keep messin with it... SIK - no, you can't do good 3d. if you really want to get better, stop trying to impress 12oz, and start trying to impress yourself. take a break from posting any pictures and just do upper-case simples with no 3d for yourself for a while (not 1 or 2 days, maybe 1 or 2 months or more...). BRICK ^try to make your letters look like that in a size 1000 font or whatever.... really, not hating on you, im just trying to help you improve at a quicker rate, you just need to do it.... ..now someone give me some crits... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ENKM Posted May 27, 2011 Share Posted May 27, 2011 Yea i think I know how to fix the K and the connectors werent my idea lmao they were my buddies xD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted May 27, 2011 Share Posted May 27, 2011 Fuck that simple shit.Go do some ten color, stupid wildstyle, background and character productions yo. For reall.. haha. Anyway on a serious note, enkm that shits straight kid, all I can say is make your letters skinnier and sketch it a couple more times to work out little kinks and stuff. Most of the times with anyones stuff it just needs refining ya know. Angle this more or less, resize this, take that out, add that in, shit like that. Good stuff though keep it up. Along with straight letters try some other styles for the hell of it. Brick, yeah the 3d is the biggest thing man. But no worries 3d you wil get with practice. Like some places you have 3d it should not be there and you missed some spots where it actually should be. Ill do a sketch matching your letters and flick step by step how to do 3d for ya. No diss just tryin to help ya know. Your b is alright. The r looks squished. I is ok. C looks big as fuck and dominates the piece. And the k is ok. I think all of the letters just need some tlc and practice. But not too bad, I've seen way worse shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ENKM Posted May 27, 2011 Share Posted May 27, 2011 Lmao yeah I'm trying to work out most of the kinks and trying to take to many muscle relaxers cause my hands shake like a fucking jack hammer haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted May 27, 2011 Share Posted May 27, 2011 what yall think. enkm, i see improvement but the bottom leg of the K always bothers me for some reason Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted May 27, 2011 Share Posted May 27, 2011 Nice darkeist. Play with the sizing of your letters. And make that horrizontal bar on the s as skinny as the skinny bars on the e Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ENKM Posted May 27, 2011 Share Posted May 27, 2011 Yea i made the bar wider on one side, ill post a flick later or tomorrow or sumthin haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KADE_ONE Posted May 27, 2011 Share Posted May 27, 2011 bump that deos it looks proper Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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