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FAX- just stop. if your not going to listen to anything anyone has to say, you might as well stop trying. multiple people have given you really good advice, but you didn't give their advice a chance. instead you keep posting these horrible sketches and doing whatever the hell you want. just fucking give up now, cause you are always going to be a toy

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FAX- just stop. if your not going to listen to anything anyone has to say, you might as well stop trying. multiple people have given you really good advice, but you didn't give their advice a chance. instead you keep posting these horrible sketches and doing whatever the hell you want. just fucking give up now, cause you are always going to be a toy

 

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Sik -TwentyFo, that's alot better, it's all the same height and roughly the same proportions which make it better to look at straight away.

The S needs to flow more at the top and bottom, the top overlaps the body so try and bring it out slightly more if you can because you would still be able to fill up the dead space with 3D (Don't do loads though). And on the tail of the S it seems thicker than the body so instead of having it as a line finishing kindo of like a spike, try and curve it so it looks more like an S should :)

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