Toys post here...

[Sevage]

 

crits?

 

You understand 3d very well, try playing with the vanishing point just for the fun of it...ie: make it to the top right of the page instead of right in the middle of the piece

 

your letters have zero flow or style

personally I would say screw colors for awhile and do a shit ton of sketches of just letters first

 

it looks like you understand letter structure really well, so use the blocks for the letters and extend them a bit, bend them, or play with them however you want

I did a sketch to show phony what I mean, hopefully it helps

 

[Big Teetas]

Ruck, rather than trying extensions, try getting the letters to merge into themselves a bit more, at the moment you have nice letters but they are 4 individual letters, just try to get the letters to connect with each other and flow into each other. Or break the letters down a bit more, there is nothing to say the R has to be a solid R it could be made up of 2 parts like the upright and the curve, just break the letters down a bit

 

Okie doke, i'll keep tweaking my letters, this is the style of letters i'm running with at the moment, most potential for using extensions I think, Well so far that I have found in my designs.

[colorkiller]

its getting there

[sech]

Sech, if thats an S its a pretty dope S but the loop extension makes it look like an O

yep it's a S.

[Anti-Zen]

kinda screwed up on 3d, and tried some new stuff like you guys suggested..crits?

looked better before i put the green in the letters =/

[freakeenyc]

try different fonts out...go to ms word and make a font bold and size big and try mimicing em...

 

for the one u posted, the extensions have an extra bit that seems to go into the letters, it looks awkard on this one.

[Big Teetas]

don;t bother with colour for awhile, just sticl to pencil and ink outlines for awhile. but you are heading in the right direction, trey what freak sad.

[Ome Depot]

[Anti-Zen]

 

ya fucked it up...its supposed to be the font Andalus.

[stealthyxcougar]

decent first attempt zen. it's good to see you trying to progress naturally as opposed to most who jump the gun and try to get super complex a few years too soon. keep at it man

[Tuco Salamanca]

zen: I like the style, but you need more steadiness with the pen.

[Anti-Zen]

 

god i cannot get this down, bookman old style.

 

ik =/ i think its becaue im lookin at the screen and unsure of the lines and whatnot... =/ im a lot more confident w/ simples haha but then everyone is.

[Sevage]

that looks much better

 

I whipped this up befor I saw that last post... I was basically just going to say when copying fonts, make sure you learn the letter structure ie the blocks that make the letter then just play with them...hope this helps

 

[Sevage]

And an S pimped out to maybe give you some ideas of crap you can do to the letters

[RECNEPS]

Ruckus: not bad, man. It's definitely got an even flow to it.

 

Saph: I think what you got going on would make a good throwie. You should do another in just black & white.

 

Zen: You're getting it. Sometimes the simpler the letter structure is, the harder it is to make it look good.

[RECNEPS]

Some of Cruiser's latest work, I know it ain't perfect, but whatevs.

[massgraff]

those are ill, i just don't like how you wrote death of time on tha 2nd one. it's like you just wanted to hurry up and be done.

[HtotheK]

those are ill, i just don't like how you wrote death of time on tha 2nd one. it's like you just wanted to hurry up and be done.

 

Agreed he even drawed a stopwatch :D

[freakeenyc]

cruise try working on other letters/exchanges itll help u experiment and develop ur style further.

[Anti-Zen]

 

tried this when i first woke up, didnt realize how bad it was till i actually woke up. (gungshuche font)

[freakeenyc]

thats good zen..being able to pick up on your own mistakes is really important...im liking the direction that ur heading in as well..

[HtotheK]

Had a couple of those thought I had drawed the sickest piece ever, but the day after I almost felt ashamed of what I had accompished :P

[redeyedanimal]

zen, those handstyles need to be calmed down too, just go for simple and clean and they'll look much better.

[RECNEPS]

Thanks yall. I forgot to mention that character and the "Disciples Of Time" weren't done by me.

[Anti-Zen]

ill post some more later, i just got some cheap paint, old plywood, and a mask so i wanna go work on some can control, thanks for the feedback guys its really helpin

[Sevage]

Hah yup that happens to me almost every sketch

[massgraff]

:lol: !

[Anti-Zen]

well my can control sucks, id post wat i did but id be too embarrsed lol im workin on some sketches though ill post later. (any one else notice, theres only like three different types of fonts?)

[Pew_Pew_Pew]

 

crits plz

 

bump for crits plz

[massgraff]

its pretty decent.