freakeenyc Posted July 5, 2010 Share Posted July 5, 2010 that bolska is tight! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted July 5, 2010 Share Posted July 5, 2010 BOOM1969: nice simples man, like the bolsak sketch better. the B needed some work though, the vertical bar doesn't match up, but everything else is tight. i understand what you were trying to do with the 3-d on the second sketch, but if the letters are coming from different directions you got to try to make every point of the letter match up to the vanishing point. props. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted July 5, 2010 Share Posted July 5, 2010 Freak, the E and A are too close together kotes, dope. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted July 5, 2010 Share Posted July 5, 2010 @ servicecamp - it's like a reverse vanishing point. The vanishing point is at the top, then the lines continue through the letters and the 3d is on the opposite side of the vanishing point. I don't find it to be a very convicing style of 3d, but some people can pull it off well. Boom, it's lookin much better though. Letters are consistent and startin to get some style on them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted July 5, 2010 Share Posted July 5, 2010 Freak, the E and A are too close together kotes, dope. bottom of the page bump Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boom1969 Posted July 6, 2010 Share Posted July 6, 2010 something i did this morning before work Twyst Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPEAKBTK Posted July 6, 2010 Share Posted July 6, 2010 dope shit twyst, freak, and kotes need some crits on my simple style simple sketch filled in/shaded Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boom1969 Posted July 6, 2010 Share Posted July 6, 2010 A and k look to be alot bigger than the other letters bud. Also 3d looks a bit inconsistant in the shaded version. Maybe try doing the 3d without shadig the interior of the letters? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sech Posted July 6, 2010 Share Posted July 6, 2010 something i did this morning before work Twyst DOPE. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sech Posted July 6, 2010 Share Posted July 6, 2010 i know simples are better. AM NOT GONNA WEAR THAT. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted July 6, 2010 Share Posted July 6, 2010 feeling it^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted July 6, 2010 Share Posted July 6, 2010 fucking o's Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ugene Posted July 6, 2010 Share Posted July 6, 2010 first sketch of this style critiques? other than the leg on the r is too skinny and same on the left Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPEAKBTK Posted July 6, 2010 Share Posted July 6, 2010 yo kire. whaddup from SP. only thing besides the r i don't like is the top of the E Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPEAKBTK Posted July 7, 2010 Share Posted July 7, 2010 also red eyed why you neggapropping me? I'm sure I deserve it, not tryin to get an ego or anything, but some crits would be helpful instead of just negging me. no hate Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted July 7, 2010 Share Posted July 7, 2010 you continuously talk out of your ass. KEYBORD SIMPLES. USE BARS TO CREATE LETTERS AND MAINTAIN CONSISTENT BAR WIDTH. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted July 7, 2010 Share Posted July 7, 2010 first sketch of this style almost a straight letter, with a good bit of toy thrown in there. Make it look like this: KIRE Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ugene Posted July 7, 2010 Share Posted July 7, 2010 WORD UP THANKS FOR NOT DISSIN HOMIE Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MellowDrone Posted July 7, 2010 Share Posted July 7, 2010 fucking o's lose extensions, work on your R, but i like the throw :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
front line Posted July 7, 2010 Share Posted July 7, 2010 also red eyed why you neggapropping me? I'm sure I deserve it, not tryin to get an ego or anything, but some crits would be helpful instead of just negging me. no hate he wants to be a mod soo bad but cant.. he rides my dick too with props. him and shaken dream about me at night hopeing that they sent out enough rep that night so they can neg prop me the next day. hahaha really shuts 12oz down when all these fags find this site and then all of a sudden there kings.. loose the big heads guys it aint workin ha. ps shaken and redfag get off the nuts already Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted July 7, 2010 Share Posted July 7, 2010 fuckin kids :rolleyes: edit: and redeye has nothin else to do but try to build up prop points so he can distribute negs to anyone whos not him. ive got about 10 from that loser? thanks fake mod! :cool: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted July 7, 2010 Share Posted July 7, 2010 :haha: funny thing is I KNOW my life is better than either of you fuckin clowns. :clown2: :haha: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boom1969 Posted July 7, 2010 Share Posted July 7, 2010 Re: Toys post here.. Firwt thanks for the crits from the last page ugene top of the r is way out of proportion and e is umm squished for lack of a better term. K is ok but i would lose the kickback on the top arm. Better to learn to keep all lines same width for a while then build off them little by little as you get them down. The one on the previous page i did in hat manner. Started with stock straight letters and then just tweaked them here and there to give a bit of flair just cause i am a pain in the ass like that. The one i did up on this page was a one off just cause i had the idea in my head and wanted to give it a shot, to be honest i am 30% happy with it, i think the other 70% is kinda crap but was a learning experience. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AWZK Posted July 7, 2010 Share Posted July 7, 2010 better than serk..odler post.. so now...whats up? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted July 7, 2010 Share Posted July 7, 2010 whack. read the thread. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BUMPINSLAPPERS Posted July 7, 2010 Share Posted July 7, 2010 everything on this page is absolute garbage, except yets sketch but I can't read the first 2/3 letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ugene Posted July 7, 2010 Share Posted July 7, 2010 Re: Toys post here.. Firwt thanks for the crits from the last page ugene top of the r is way out of proportion and e is umm squished for lack of a better term. K is ok but i would lose the kickback on the top arm. Better to learn to keep all lines same width for a while then build off them little by little as you get them down. The one on the previous page i did in hat manner. Started with stock straight letters and then just tweaked them here and there to give a bit of flair just cause i am a pain in the ass like that. The one i did up on this page was a one off just cause i had the idea in my head and wanted to give it a shot, to be honest i am 30% happy with it, i think the other 70% is kinda crap but was a learning experience. word ill sketch up two styles Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted July 7, 2010 Share Posted July 7, 2010 awzk - you need to start with simples. I can see your letters, but the structure is crap, the consistancy of the letters does not match up, and the random cut-ins and extensions make it look worse. twyst - your fills are always dope. i like your fill on this one as well, but the letter structure is out there. you should refine that but make it symmetrical, it could be the bidness then... sech - so glad you lost those wtf arrows, lookin better, id work on makin your extensions make a little more sense... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted July 8, 2010 Share Posted July 8, 2010 a quick 'mock' with old crayolas.. kinda gave up after the o because my daughter decided she'd help fill when i wasnt lookin, haha.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted July 8, 2010 Share Posted July 8, 2010 everything on this page is absolute garbage, except yets sketch but I can't read the first 2/3 letters. says eons. some crits would be nice. ill crit some other shit in here in a lil bit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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