sneekatoke Posted May 29, 2010 Share Posted May 29, 2010 that y on the FUCKIN SIMPLE is no bueno. besides that its pretty dope, i agree w/ freak, i think you should try some more complex stuff, your simples are always pretty clean. SNOE ... EONS.... ha... SNOE -pretty good, the throw's s is alright but i dont dig the rest. the simples pretty good too. EONS - i like where youre goin with that. the right side of the n throws it off i think though, its a lil big. N8 - try sketching 4 even circles (lightly just keep doing circles with your pencil until it looks pretty close to exactly round), then take a little out of the 1st one to make a c, leave the 2nd, add a middle bar and take out a little of the 3rd to make an e and lightly sketch an s INSIDE the last circle... finally, do a clean, darker line over the best looking sketched lines and erase the rest... that should help you a lot...(tried to make it real easy to get over the net) ENOR - moar simples Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ENORMOUS407 Posted May 29, 2010 Share Posted May 29, 2010 that y on the FUCKIN SIMPLE is no bueno. besides that its pretty dope, i agree w/ freak, i think you should try some more complex stuff, your simples are always pretty clean. SNOE ... EONS.... ha... SNOE -pretty good, the throw's s is alright but i dont dig the rest. the simples pretty good too. EONS - i like where youre goin with that. the right side of the n throws it off i think though, its a lil big. N8 - try sketching 4 even circles (lightly just keep doing circles with your pencil until it looks pretty close to exactly round), then take a little out of the 1st one to make a c, leave the 2nd, add a middle bar and take out a little of the 3rd to make an e and lightly sketch an s INSIDE the last circle... finally, do a clean, darker line over the best looking sketched lines and erase the rest... that should help you a lot...(tried to make it real easy to get over the net) ENOR - moar simples moar simples? waht yew mean by that? jus tryna get some critique Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted May 30, 2010 Share Posted May 30, 2010 which one do you want critiqued? ill let you know what i think can be helped, etc, but not on all those man... i already type too much as it is! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ENORMOUS407 Posted May 30, 2010 Share Posted May 30, 2010 lol i feel yew.. waht yew think about ENOR. MGK overall? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted May 30, 2010 Share Posted May 30, 2010 eli he just means ur 3d doesnt line up as in isnt parallel and also the lengths of ur 3d isnt 2 consistent..(ie longer in some place and smaller in others) these crits are just finetuning shit....otherwise ur works been really dope dude...if u can freestyle simps..i think u shud start fuxing with some next level shit dude. Freak knows. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
litehsu Posted May 30, 2010 Share Posted May 30, 2010 http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/1286/0529002319.jpg' alt='0529002319.jpg'> Uploaded with ImageShack.us[/img] crits please, Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MellowDrone Posted May 30, 2010 Share Posted May 30, 2010 ^ dont do extremely block-ish letters like that, and dont have one side of your letter sticking up above the other side ... keep practicing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KYcrop44 Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 I really probly shouldnt even post this but Ive been reading for awhile and see that when starting off stay simple instead of doing all that complex shit. Well ive been doing that for a few days now and I did this tonight, its pretty horrible and I totally screwed the S on that corner. But imma just show yu all anyways. if yu give advice i usually take it except fr when telling me to quit and give up cause that just makes me want it more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 NICE! keep doin that man, and pay attention to the bar width, and making it stay consistent. Start off on graph paper if you need to, it's all mathematical. Try a more flowing text next time and see what it looks like. Nice work though man, seriously. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 ^that.. and word u see wat u did on the S thats good..just keep doing it...tell ur lines are straighter ..and can rock it naturally..u can also add an extra dimension to ur simples by adding 3d 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 freak, check your user cp... get down. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KYcrop44 Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 Thanks for the positive feedback, yea Im working on making my lines straighter and payin close attention to the width, Im sure that will get better with time. but I added this shadow right after I posted that and it makes it stick out alot better in my opinion. And by a more flowing type of letters as in ones that are more round and have more curves? I chose that cause it had straight angles and curved ones too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BUMPINSLAPPERS Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 haha tight, you should've done the "I'm" and "Chillin" in letters instead of tags Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 thanks freak. checked it in the sober daylight and i can do better. but for my 1st book ever i'm pretty happy with my progress. slow and steady wins the race, as they say.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
setokeno Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 thats pretty dope, except i dont think your E and S match the rest since they are fatter Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rakse Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 its honestly a breath of fresh air to see someone actually pay attention finally, KYcrop44 keep doing that and before you know it you'll be better than all the people who think they can do wild shit straight away. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idk401 Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KYcrop44 Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 Yea I've seen it said over and over so I figured there must be some kind of logic to it and now that I've practiced it some I see how it helps. Im just lookin thru fonts on my comp now to see which one I want to try next. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KYcrop44 Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 Just did this, Its Impact font, I havnt added any 3d or shadow yet. I hate messin with 3d but it does make it look way better. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 perfect. props 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
setokeno Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 just perfect as was said yeah the shadow fucked up and the flow need to work more on it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 JUST: you're one step closer to having style, even though it seems like a long ways away. props. KOTE: dope keep it up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KYcrop44 Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 it does seem a ways away before I can do anything with some style but Im gettin better. I really need improvement on my 3d look at this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
setokeno Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 yo its just simple make the 3d all even and not one bigger then another simple as making block letters here's a piece take look at that you will understand and like everyone say practice make perfect Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 Another good example of how to rock a simple is Ichabod. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KYcrop44 Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 just did this off the top of my head, is the same as that one style just added some angles. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RES4 Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 just- shits almost perfect except the s and t are sorta turned round a bit. just watch that. if you have to you could draw lines above and below across the page to keep the proportions right. the other thing is the drop shadow on the s. it should be like this kome- i like it. maybe dont overlap the middle of the e like that tho kote- work on the first one. it has more potential iv already been told the lowercase e is better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 havent posted in a little bit, so, heres random drunken sketches... an s: an o: sheisty sodem: lil stickers: weird s: messin around: i dont know..: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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