n8galicia Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 meh. I just noticed that the spine of the E is way off aha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 really?!? That's what you're working with?!? That's awful. Absolutely wrong. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nvs Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 white board markers... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nvs Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 looks alot like sofles Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nvs Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 meh. I just noticed that the spine of the E is way off aha u did that? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nvs Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 meh...fucking about... sez slide... i bet u guys love the arrows! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RES4 Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 looks alot like sofles it does say sofles but i think it was for a bs battle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blar. Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 Some more and more and more and more haha practiceeeeeee I realize the way I'm doing it is sort of making it look like "BARIE" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 ...nm. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
setokeno Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 NVS fresh sketch man! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rakse Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 really quick letters just need some crits see what im doing right/wrong the 'A' is to far spaced out from the rest. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DirtyWhiteBoyX Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 BARE: i like them first two handys man. RAKSE: may just be me but it looks like you bit Mr. Wiggles, i could be wrong though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rakse Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 RAKSE: may just be me but it looks like you bit Mr. Wiggles, i could be wrong though ah worst thing i could hear. ill fill it in make some changes and post it back up. cheers for the response. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blar. Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 Thanks, keeping it simple.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 i would def lose the loopy thing on the end of that e... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rakse Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 Thanks, keeping it simple.. i prefer that one for sure Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 bump for crits. Raske: not too mr wigglish. that R is fucked up though. the leg should come out of where the loop touches the backbone. also watch your widths. Bare: that last handy is better, but on the R, dont have the leg cut back to the left at the bottom. sorta makes it look a little like a B. Try a script-ish E too. or just lowercase. should look better. Kotes: pretty dope, but watch the E on the second sketch. it's pretty fat. NVS: your trying too hard. simplify it. N8angelic: do keyboard letters Bakup: take off those little extension shits that you have goin on, and loosen it up some more. Weakfinger: dope. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 yet, i digg that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hank Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 Uploaded with ImageShack.us Asper: Work on making those bars more even, your letters are too top heavy. Apply that knowledge with a shitload of simples until you've mastered that. Shulgin: Just work on simple block letters dude. :rolleyes: Weakfinger: Dope throws! On that last sketch the upper left side of the S is very awkward though, I'm not feeling it. Soul: Can't tell if you're attempting to do a throw or a piece. Work on simples before you try to get funky, and make your letters proportionately even. Backup: Fix the K on that first sketch so that it isn't standing out like that. You also might want to try an even simpler style if that makes any sense....you use too many cuts and I can already see that you're trying to progress to fast, but keep it at a steady pace. Crits? get a new name. since 1989 here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
setokeno Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 yeah the E fucked up on both of them think of doing it on a wall Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 for a friend for mom Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 seto: the T looks awkward shaken: how sweet lol. looking nice, but the Kaitlin piece could use work. Some of the extensions stick out like a sore thumb.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 That Katelin piece is wack.. Simplify it some. Loosen it up. Its really stiff and blocky. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DirtyWhiteBoyX Posted May 12, 2010 Share Posted May 12, 2010 I figured it was BS to give crits with out posting something. so any crits? KOTE: i like it, think you could get rid of the bottom extension on the "T" though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted May 12, 2010 Share Posted May 12, 2010 ocean - i think that katelin would look a lot better if the bottom was even like the top somewhat is.. kiosk - i would try to do more straight letters (less curves).. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted May 12, 2010 Share Posted May 12, 2010 Kisok: Give it less funk, and what sneekatoke said, more simple. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted May 12, 2010 Share Posted May 12, 2010 ocean, you're a softy. ha ha. JK, but whose mom doesn't want a card with their child's vandal name? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted May 12, 2010 Share Posted May 12, 2010 lol. its a canvas. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted May 12, 2010 Share Posted May 12, 2010 simples, simples... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted May 12, 2010 Share Posted May 12, 2010 lower dip in the e is way fat compared to the rest of the letters.. and try to go over your finished outline and press harder on your pencil doing as long and solid of a line as you can, the outlines mad shaky, a lot better though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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