freakeenyc Posted April 22, 2010 Share Posted April 22, 2010 sodem feelin it... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fiddly.bits Posted April 22, 2010 Share Posted April 22, 2010 sodem feelin it... Seconded. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
viseversa101 Posted April 22, 2010 Share Posted April 22, 2010 im diggin it sodem Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DukeOne Posted April 22, 2010 Share Posted April 22, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
viseversa101 Posted April 22, 2010 Share Posted April 22, 2010 god damn duke, always good...i like the top 2...bottom is iffy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fiddly.bits Posted April 22, 2010 Share Posted April 22, 2010 Duke, I have no idea wtf they say. No; really. EDIT: True that I like your hands. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted April 22, 2010 Share Posted April 22, 2010 Duke, especially diggin' those hands. Sodem, hit that with some color! Dope. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noone57 Posted April 22, 2010 Share Posted April 22, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted April 22, 2010 Share Posted April 22, 2010 2nd one - add vertical arrows. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted April 22, 2010 Share Posted April 22, 2010 moar arrows Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted April 22, 2010 Share Posted April 22, 2010 more arroz? Some old stuff from last year/08 i think Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SKUMBUM Posted April 22, 2010 Share Posted April 22, 2010 wierdone: dope colour scheme and solid letters duze:really nice work, dope colour scemes although some letters are a little squashed together and hard to make out, id suggest working on your simples a little more as it always helps having really solid letters before adding all the jagged connections and shit, still good work tho. sodem: some good pieces but they looks a little familiar i dont know maybe its just me, especially the lower case e. not callin a bite or anything just looks very heavily influenced but i cant put my finger on who by, atill decent pieces and really good flow no1: SIMPLES!!! cut the arrows and shit until your learned to do simples first or youl tak years to step up your game, also for now try studying other dudes colouring schemes it doesnt look like you really grasp where bubbles look good etc... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nvs Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 a lil something... critic please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C"mon Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 i like it,maybe the M a litte bite larger.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 nope. Go back to the basics. Straight letter simples. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C"mon Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 :confused: Go kids do shit like a blockbuster(rollers) for the rest of your life..SIMPLE very simple and don"t any colors before 2,3 years:o Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 people here tend to see thing in black and white. Keep a simple letter structure to learn how the letter is formed. Fuck with colors whenever you feel like it, but don't just throw them on the page. Learn some color theory. DON'T PAINT when you're still a toy, you'll end up havin to pay for shit you regret doing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stotter Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 semi happy with it. crits Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 The R doesn't fit in. The rest of the letters have points somewhere on the curved areas, and the R is smooth. THe leg is straight, but the top right arm doesn't work. Fix that and it will look pretty good. Also, i've found that doing a forcefield with a color that is a strong contrast to the outline but in the same 3 space range of the fill is the best. Yellow doesn't make blue pop off of the page, but a different blue might. Or take that color and mix it with the yellow, and get a lime green. Fuck with colors a bit, get some knowledge from charts and artsy heads. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 stot on teh ts... the bits on the bottom almost make them look like cs Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stotter Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 I would say that I actually have good color combos and ideas. It's just that I don't have the tools to do that. The only reason I used these colors is because that's all that I have. haha I'm not sure what you mean by points on the curved areas. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 just square off the top right part of the r and I think it would fit better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
viseversa101 Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 quick simple sketch, reminds me of a shoe logo? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
viseversa101 Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 throwie idea.... tadah Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kasle Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 I'm a total toy myself, but all I can say is, same for me, practice makes perfect. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kasle Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 Vise, I like the second throwie sketch a lot more than the first. Though the style is not origional, it's good. Find a way to own each letter and make it your own. ^_^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 vise, that still looks awful. When do you plan on doing some simples? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SKUMBUM Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 vise, that still looks awful. When do you plan on doing some simples? word. 1.open microsoft word, 2.type VISE and flick though the different fonts 3.practice sketching them 4.????? 5.profit 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 vise u cant do a simple simple..keep working on em till u can perfect em with ur eyes closed....trust me... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 did a SODEM just for kicks. if anyone wants to exchange or whatever let me know. VISE: it's better than before but still, listen to redeye and freak, they know what they're saying. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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