RECNEPS Posted February 11, 2010 Share Posted February 11, 2010 I thought Ocean died for a quick sec. Rip Charles, that's cool. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted February 11, 2010 Share Posted February 11, 2010 some dope as blackbook pages for sale..not that its worth buying..but really good to look at. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stotter Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 I write Stot. heres some of my shit. just some basic shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 eh. could use a lot of work, like on the S and letter size consistency. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 last stots thebest one..keep doing stuff like taht..also not that the width of the upper horizonatal bar of the Ts thicker than the other letters..just skinny em up a bbit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stotter Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 Thanks here some more of my shit fucked up the second T Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grasptheknown Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EastHastings Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 ergot from richmond, va? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
germs281 Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 thanks dude.nice to know not everyone hates me lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 what? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
germs281 Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 i meant to copy what he said but that was to RECNEPS Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 I like that Stotr piece. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eido Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 Crits please?:) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boris The Blade Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 I'm new here, but I've been on bombing science lurking, and active on PG for a while. PG is a shithole now, and i love what's going on on this site. Always good flicks, always good crits. Stot- first one on the second post is not too bad. If you cleaned up the letters, and took the extension off the the s and t, and the bit off of the O, it would look a lot better. The Robot doesn't really fit, but whatever works. Ergot- first one is good shit. clean, and no pointless shit. The last piece, the symmetrical one, would be good finished. Just clean up the O, and take that pointless bend out of it. Just work on that, cause it isn't bad. Eido- you know what i think. what do you all think of that? freestyle on receipt paper at work. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 Boris - I like it, I preferred your other one with the doughnut icing and sprinkles, only thing I would say is the A is smaller than the other letters, but then it could just be the way the picture was taken. Welcome to 12oz though dude. Alts Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deshi_kicks Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 So my girlfriend decided she'd give it a shot, this is what she came up with for her first go round. She for some reason asked me to post it here saying "tell them its my attempt at being gangster!" haha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 tell her she is doing better than most people that start, nice clean consistent letters, 3D is spot on! She has a bright future Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deshi_kicks Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 Will do, appreciate it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
\>=+-] Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 Crits please?:) color it and lets see where it goes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deshi_kicks Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 Here goes something of mine, its kinda old cause I've been out for a while so yeah. I have pretty much no artistic abilities at all, I can't draw for shit, so please do keep that in mind haha. Also, please ignore the absolute shit tags/handy, I don't do it like that anymore: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 It's just too messy man, can't make it out, do something cleaner, actually fill it rather than scribble in it. Its blackbook work, no need to rush it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deshi_kicks Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 Yeah I definitely see what you're saying. It was a long time ago, I think I was trying to make it look like a wall or some stupid shit. Anything I did in marker was filled proper, looked shitty and uneven but filled. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfraRed Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 I'm not good at handstyles but I'll critique it a bit, hopefully some others will agree... Change the s completely, especially that extension, the p is overlapping the s too much I think, and lose that extension on the p or make it look better, the e is ok, but notice how you have some letters tilted in one direction and other letters tilted in another direction. This isn't necessarily a bad thing it can make handstyles look good but generally if you want good flow the letters should all tilt in one direction. Lose the quotation marks, lose the squiggly line at the bottom also, or make it better.. also take away that FAK thing or make it look better because the letters are disproportionate and dont really look good... I guess what I'm trying to say is hit the books more... look at other handstyles and look at how the letters fall in place with eachother, they usually fit quite nicely. Until you have handstyles down proper, don't even fuck with squiggles. You have to master a straight line first; try just underlining it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfraRed Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 sucks, I have no drawing tools or skills 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boris The Blade Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 thanks alts, I appreciate it! And yeah, the A did end up being smaller, noticed i drew the E to the top of the arm, instead of the top of the A. gotta sit down and colour some, get it right. Infra, work on straightening the bars on the second and last letters. Not sure if it's a Z and another Z, or a Z and an M. Try distinguishing them a little better. Try drawing bigger too, or get a thinner marker! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stotter Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 Stot- first one on the second post is not too bad. If you cleaned up the letters, and took the extension off the the s and t, and the bit off of the O, it would look a lot better. The Robot doesn't really fit, but whatever works. I remember you from BS. Thanks for the crits. I tried to base it off of the second one in that post. Pretty much the same except I just added some shit here and there. Ergot- Ease up on the drips in the first one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 if you're not already into art, or even a little bit good at it, why would you pick graffiti as a new hobby? i'm not into cars, so i wouldn't try being a mechanic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeek-ATL Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 tell me what you think Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deshi_kicks Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 if you're not already into art, or even a little bit good at it, why would you pick graffiti as a new hobby? i'm not into cars, so i wouldn't try being a mechanic If that's directed at me (or even if it isn't I guess), I'm definitely into art, I love it. Sculptures, paintings, drawings, pastels, anything, I love it all. It amazes me how some people are so good at it. Its something I've always loved, I just suck at it. Now, for me it isn't about getting up or anything, but I can draw letters better than anything else so that's what I do. Graffiti is definitely something I love the most as far as any type of art is concerned, it has that raw appeal. Nobody bombs a train or does a wildstyle to anybody elses standards for the most part, but other art sometimes feels like it was done so it could be admired or sold or whatever bullshit. It sounds wack, but its straight in my head, I just can't explain it right. As far as not getting up or anything, at this point in my life its blackbooking only, I have too much to lose to be bombing and keep putting up tags and shit. So basically I just do it for myself, cause I can't draw anything else for shit. I'm trying to draw roses for my girl for Valentines day (trust, she'd rather have some drawn ones than regular ones), and I'm failing so hard, I've been trying for like two days straight and I'm even copying shit I find on google images. TL;DR, I'm better at letters/graffiti than anything else, and I'm not even half way decent at graffiti. Its really appealing to me, I love just looking at wildstyles and even just throws, I could and have just sat and looked at mad flicks for hours. Sorry if that little rant makes no sense and is out of place, I'm tired as fuck. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
germs281 Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 thanks alts, I appreciate it! And yeah, the A did end up being smaller, noticed i drew the E to the top of the arm, instead of the top of the A. gotta sit down and colour some, get it right. Infra, work on straightening the bars on the second and last letters. Not sure if it's a Z and another Z, or a Z and an M. Try distinguishing them a little better. Try drawing bigger too, or get a thinner marker! yo the sketch is fresh but honestly you need to start fuking with colors,if you do that on a wall its going to look like shit.trust me i know i use draw peices that style all day... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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