Polyp Posted July 26, 2009 Share Posted July 26, 2009 few new trying to make the simps better proportoned, ques about the top pic would it be better to make the A mid bar wide as other lines? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted July 26, 2009 Share Posted July 26, 2009 dude poly try straight simples now...like DOA tehn work onto the things ur doing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DR.EVIL Posted July 26, 2009 Share Posted July 26, 2009 Dr.Evil when you first came on here you were talking tons of shit and thought you were the best thing that happened to the 0ontz, Now youre pulling some sympathy card like you're this humble little toy trying to come up in the rough slums. So now im just going to make fun of you..:p na man ive just come to realize this your opinion is your opinion and thats that.......fighting in this thread is pointless im never going to see you and youll never see me as for coming out the slums i keep it grimmey and its not a simpathy card its a realization of how people come on here talk shit about other peoples post and how they write i think they should show some of their own work to prove the fact Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DR.EVIL Posted July 26, 2009 Share Posted July 26, 2009 thoughts? totally different outline, kinda old. it looks good tho Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HOCKEY Posted July 26, 2009 Share Posted July 26, 2009 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted July 26, 2009 Share Posted July 26, 2009 ur 3d looks off..and larger in some ares.ur letters ar thcik in some areas and thin in others...ur generaly letter structure is lacking..work on simple consistent letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*oneton* Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 anybody feel like exchanging names? I like that Moek but the thickness "E" compared to the rest of the letters isnt the same. just sayin' Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 hockey, do simpler, more keyboard like letters and try to keep your bar width consistent throughout the piece. Don't try to overdo anything. Simples are mad G. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Picky P. Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 thoughts? totally different outline, kinda old. your L is looking kinda like a Y with that random piece in the middle of the bottom there. that newer L is definitely more on point. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
`Melinoe Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 http://12ozprophet.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129873 As a toy...I found this to be a good read. This isn't hinting at anyone in particular. Just for those interested. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Polyp Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 dude poly try straight simples now...like DOA tehn work onto the things ur doing ^^ i see what your saying i am bottom two throwie ideas. top one tbh i cant get simpler than that haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 you can get simpler, and he just showed you how. Simple, plain, straight letters. Just as it appears in caps above your last post. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Polyp Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 by a microfraction, ^^ after copying DOA DOA three of four times it dosent benefit you to keep repeating yourself do u agree? Id be more than happy to write K.B.S over and over if you can point out any terrible mistakes in the above "complex" sketch Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 to be honest polyp I don't really see anything wrong with the DOA, it has consistent widths, and isn't all over the place like some of the stuff that gets posted, I think the D is far mor slanted/curved than the oher letters like its leaning into the other letters where as the O and A are more stood up straight if that makes sense, i will say your 3D is off thos it is deeper in some points than others the advantage of doing lots of simples is that you get more used to the letters and then that will help when it comes to actually starting with connectinf letters/extensions Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Polyp Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 apprec that decy makes sense , im focusing on consistancy at the mo i.e widths, let dir , style i.e on the one below i did a while back i can see the overall sketch has major issue i.e some overlap some dont, dif slants etc Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*oneton* Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 Any pointers before i keep going like I said, anybody feel like exchaning names? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KNS13 Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KNS13 Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 no crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*oneton* Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 That Kema is good, the only thing id say is to connect the back of the "A" to the top, that way it would look like all the letters are the same size. Did a quick trowie, too lazy to clean it up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 KNS - Do not write Kema, I would suggest changing your name ASAP, it is a good simple but it is too much of a taken name and no point getting yourself real familiar with it if it is taken KEMA transcend http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/showthread.php?t=71574&page=22&highlight=kema Oneton - space your N out a bit the sloped middle bit is barely there and I would have the arms of the T going up like that it looks weird, I will try and do an Enty sketch later, will probably just be an outline tho, no colour Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Polyp Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 oneton only letter which looks smoothish is the Y rest dont flow well i.e E mid bar is off i would make the throwie simpler for now will look better i thinks new sketchs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Polyp Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 [/img] ill exchange if you want enty Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Polyp Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 i no its terrible lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Polyp Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 my first one liner attempt.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*oneton* Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 Decyferon: thanks i really appreciate your crit, i'll see how i can change it Polyp: haha, thanks for that. i'll try doing a Doa. ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timeforwasting Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 new to the site. lil throw Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DR.EVIL Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 that throw looks clean Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*oneton* Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 heres my exchange throwie polyp Timeforwasting: get rid of every single arrow or extension you can find and try doing keyboard simples instead. your throw is good, just needs practice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DaBurgh Posted July 28, 2009 Share Posted July 28, 2009 sketches from todays bordom Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Polyp Posted July 28, 2009 Share Posted July 28, 2009 those ASE looking good man , middle sketch A and S look clean Just a few hands : sry my cam is bad Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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