johnneh7 Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 i cant just stop sketching, i constantly have a bic pen and throw down straight letters on receipts and shit in restaurants, or ill get some paper and do some throws while my game is loading on xbox live. and VIEL, idk if your looking for crits, but the I looks similar to a L. and the V is kinda small, like the L. they just dont match the IE other than that id say its on point Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 i got out of school like 3 months ago, and usually i'm out partying or some shit so i mean, i can't carry a black book with me everywhere. i ordered a little black book though and i'll prolly carry it around Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eddymaw Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 crits are appreciated. yeah i know the block one isnt realli graff but, i felt like writing something really simple and i thought the colours worked well. really i wanna focus mainly on my handy atm Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tango 24 Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 the t in your handstlye looks like someone flat lining Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrokOne Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 haha i agree. that handstyle needs alot of work try working on each letter at a time nd check out other peoples for refrence not to bite but it will give u a idea wot a handstyle needs to look like Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eddymaw Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 haha i agree. that handstyle needs alot of work try working on each letter at a time nd check out other peoples for refrence not to bite but it will give u a idea wot a handstyle needs to look like ^okay, thanks for the crit, much appreciated. ive always felt mine is just a bit too "formal" or something? jw how i could improve it a bit,, or how you would improve it? thankss thoughh. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrokOne Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 well the letters uve chosen are decent for a handstyle S Y S gud combo personally i dont like Ts not much can b done extention wise just practice alot nd i mean alot like weeks of bombing, bomb every bit ov paper u get ur hands on then once u start getting a decent flow hit the streets nd go mental 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eddymaw Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 ^sick, advice is tons appreciated Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest theDRIVER Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 finished. excuse the blurriness. and viel is killin shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrokOne Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 nyc colour scheme, lookin gud Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnneh7 Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 i got out of school like 3 months ago, and usually i'm out partying or some shit so i mean, i can't carry a black book with me everywhere. i ordered a little black book though and i'll prolly carry it around i havent sketched in a black book in months, or used any markers or pencils since ive been out of school either. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D4real Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 rushed it, I hate a's Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest theDRIVER Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 egZyst? and some quick 10 min pencil chars. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 Nice, Driver. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Port-A-John Enthusiest Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 syst rocking them bangers still son..werd Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piece at dusk Posted July 1, 2009 Share Posted July 1, 2009 crits are appreciated. yeah i know the block one isnt realli graff but, i felt like writing something really simple and i thought the colours worked well. really i wanna focus mainly on my handy atm practice until u like it :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted July 1, 2009 Share Posted July 1, 2009 I've been thinking about switching back to my old name of ATONE. I used to be able to throw out a lot of good work with that one, but gave up on it for some reason. Comments on this, guys? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HOCKEY Posted July 1, 2009 Share Posted July 1, 2009 PROPS DRIVER.....AYE WANNA EXCHANGE...DIGGIN THOSE THROWS Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HOCKEY Posted July 1, 2009 Share Posted July 1, 2009 QUICK THROW IN CLASS Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D4real Posted July 1, 2009 Share Posted July 1, 2009 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted July 1, 2009 Share Posted July 1, 2009 driver... what's up man? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ugene Posted July 1, 2009 Share Posted July 1, 2009 rough draft of my throwy, im still tryin to fix up the e a lil bit any critiques? well all of the letters could be fixed but yeah... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted July 1, 2009 Share Posted July 1, 2009 This might be my new name. I really like it, it flows well, and I can do some fairly nice work with it. Oh, and I know that I messed up some of the basic stuff, such as letter height, width, distance between them, etc. But, it's late and I'm beat right now. AEON: One of my old names that I also might take back up (deciding between AEON and this one). ATONE: Crits, please. :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnneh7 Posted July 1, 2009 Share Posted July 1, 2009 they both could use work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest theDRIVER Posted July 1, 2009 Share Posted July 1, 2009 true but he is getting better. HOCKEY, sure ill exchange, but im known to be very late on exchanges. ziare, how is our exchange coming? kele, i know i know. but your name has no developed letters for me. it takes me time before i am confident in the letter, so itll be soon. atone, dont listen to the haters, keep doing your thing. youll get there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted July 1, 2009 Share Posted July 1, 2009 DRIVER, I gave you props for the support. I appreciate it. I'm still torn between ATONE and AEON though. Any thoughts?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flying above tree level Posted July 1, 2009 Share Posted July 1, 2009 Yeah, I've never heard of anyone writing Atone before (not to say that one doesn't exist), but I have heard of AEON SDM FLYS outta Melbourne. He's got some stuff in the FOES thread in BrickSlayers if you want to check him out. I'd pull for Atone. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted July 1, 2009 Share Posted July 1, 2009 Thanks, for the information, FATL. I don't wanna jack somebody else's name. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D4real Posted July 1, 2009 Share Posted July 1, 2009 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest theDRIVER Posted July 1, 2009 Share Posted July 1, 2009 true but he is getting better. HOCKEY, sure ill exchange, but im known to be very late on exchanges. ziare, how is our exchange coming? kele, i know i know. but your name has no developed letters for me. it takes me time before i am confident in the letter, so itll be soon. atone, dont listen to the haters, keep doing your thing. youll get there. bottom page bump. and id go with ATONE, solely for its symmetrical balance. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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