This is my Username Posted June 20, 2009 Share Posted June 20, 2009 DECY, that piece is dope, man. Well, all of it's dope, but I like the piece the best/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VICIOUS->147 Posted June 20, 2009 Share Posted June 20, 2009 Set and Bones is taken 100 times already. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest theDRIVER Posted June 20, 2009 Share Posted June 20, 2009 kele, im trying to develop a worthy K and R. ive been working dont worry. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flying above tree level Posted June 20, 2009 Share Posted June 20, 2009 sure ur simples are still off a bit..ie work on ur consistency..the s's widths differnt than the Rs widths;. also the right bar of the U tilts towards the left/ Thanks man. What do you mean about the bar of the U though? I intentionally have it sloping downwards from left->right because the R looks weak with part of its left bar obscured if I use a completely straight U. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheesburger Posted June 21, 2009 Share Posted June 21, 2009 yo wtf? isn't this a toy thread?? i thought toys were supposed to post here.:clown3: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
your dad Posted June 21, 2009 Share Posted June 21, 2009 the only advice beginners need is too work on there handstyles. nothings more embarrasing than seein a peice and an ugly ass handstyle to go with it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silba Posted June 21, 2009 Share Posted June 21, 2009 Theres nothing worse than an ugly piece AND an ugly handstyle. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightscrawler Posted June 21, 2009 Share Posted June 21, 2009 yes, its an ugly piece, ugly throw, and an ugly hand SO HA Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silba Posted June 21, 2009 Share Posted June 21, 2009 lol, haha word to that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
k1lk Posted June 21, 2009 Share Posted June 21, 2009 Thanks man. What do you mean about the bar of the U though? I intentionally have it sloping downwards from left->right because the R looks weak with part of its left bar obscured if I use a completely straight U. Sure you could also try tilting the back of you R to the right just to kind of balance the whole thing out instead of straightening the back of the U Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 a panel piece i made for the next time i paint freights. crits. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 a panel piece i made for the next time i paint freights. crits. I'm lovin' that, man. Only bone to pick is that the R sore of looks like a weird K. Other than that it's dope. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silba Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 Fix the R,as in connect the rop bar, and not make it come out so much, otther than that its pretty good, make it loook like the P if you can Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 try fuxing with letter widths ie tall skinny versions of that...also the P anr R look wierd with the disconnection. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest theDRIVER Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 phere. between the E and A negative space, but a little bit or something to fill it. and use the R crit said above. and fix the H a little bit, liek from your other pieces. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D4real Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 camera messed up my already sh!tty coloring. most of my markers are dried out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune1 Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 dope! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awkward eye Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 Nice work Kele. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eatyourpaint Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 eace? I like it, but the second letter needs to be a little more legible. The flow is good, and it's nice and clean. Re-do the outline after you do the forcefield to make it cleaner. Do you know how to cut lines? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flying above tree level Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 Sure you could also try tilting the back of you R to the right just to kind of balance the whole thing out instead of straightening the back of the U Thanks dude. I've tried that kinda idea before, will give it another shot. Might try a straight U that's a bit smaller than the other letters too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 nice stuff kele. came out nice. for teh bs battle..im taking the middle one/? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bend Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 phere, i would make your R look more like your P, but it looks pretty good otherwise Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 since there is supposedly another person writin phere(damn i thought that was original.) cant just put a 2 behind my name and call it a day. harsh criticism on the piece please. it really helps. lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted June 23, 2009 Share Posted June 23, 2009 dope shit freak, and phere i think you need simples a little longer, your colours are good and linework, but the letters don't flow that well. remove the little add on things. they look whack :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted June 23, 2009 Share Posted June 23, 2009 KELE: that's sick, bro! PHERE: sick as usual. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted June 23, 2009 Share Posted June 23, 2009 thanx. big teetas. any ideas on how to make it flow better. bcuz i thought it did. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted June 23, 2009 Share Posted June 23, 2009 well it's not terrible flow, but could be better, remove all those little add on bits and post one, i'll tell you more about it then. your widths also seem quite inconsistent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted June 23, 2009 Share Posted June 23, 2009 I think you needa work on your R, like the leg that sticks out is always really what bothers me. and make your bars a little skinnier, just a little. And I think it'd look a lot better if you stopped disconnecting the tops of the P's and R's like you do. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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