DM! Posted December 19, 2007 Share Posted December 19, 2007 feel free to post up your crits and comments. use the numbers to cite which photo ur talking about. especially for the new sketch and maybe the new bomb using the same kinda shape- inspired roughly by menos. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. bump for crits rofl. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sec_ebk Posted December 19, 2007 Share Posted December 19, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 19, 2007 Share Posted December 19, 2007 all of em i like cept the second to last. keep it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dayfed Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 ^ yeah, im digging most of those Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blart.BOS Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 sec you wanna exchange? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jjrythem Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 this is for the Cruise battle crits would be great also the handstyle is fake, i suck at it(the battle ends today) so i didnt have time to practice at all but yeah ill start working on that a little but anyways, Criticism is great! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 btw for future reference, to put a image on the site without having to follow a link is done by clicking the tool and the top of the message you would be writing, which looks like a mountain with a moon behind. then u copy n paste the adress. now for the crits, everyone is gonna tell u this. GO SIMPLER. start with straight lines not wavy ones. as for the handy, it looks ok. better than mine :D.. New bomb idea thing. i like it a lot. crits appreciated. peace. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JakeBaumer44 Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 jjrythem ur letters look like they are shaped out of deformed eggs haha. go simpler Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:abate:. Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 Fine- that shit is lookin clean neuro- sick naris- im kinda diggin your idea. i think i've seen similar stuff before but i like it. focus- the 3d on the O is missing. it overlaps the C but the 3d isnt there... work on your consistancy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jjrythem Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 ok ill go simpler next time thanks! o yeah I think i fixed my link but for some reason after i logged in like i used to just check the forums out a lot b4 i was able to see the Images in the forum but now i have to click every link anyone know why? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 exchage spec. eh fantom i wanna exchange with u too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal.method Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 dear god. go simple, the bittin s doesnt match any of your other letters, your handstyle needs some work, i dont know why people are still posting and ignoring the simple most followed rule basics first. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maviK_ Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 yea, and work on that throw up it looks wack Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 okeee. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kr0n1k Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 taiko- just some criticism... that last shit you posted.. focus.. is still not as simple as people been meanin for you to do, start with just straight letters and work on proportioning them and making them all the same size and then add to it, after awhile you can add connections, arrows, whatever and have it look good... chances are you'll have to do this for awhile before you can do something that can actually be considered a burner.. no diss. a lot off writers styles are built of a basic straight letter style Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JakeBaumer44 Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 aiight define here is my part of the exchange. Definately got to work on letters besides D E F I N E. not my best, but i have shit to do, mayb ill redo it another time Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hypergraphia Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 update felt like doing a straight letter some regular sketching Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krusify Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 naris nice last piece! DM! the throws ok i guess.. for the cruise battle. crits r truly appreciated^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DJ Ren Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 nice naris i like em! and dm i like number 2 a sketch i did 2day any crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sec_ebk Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 sec you wanna exchange? mhmmm you write sank right? Dj Ren that's ill. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DJ Ren Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 thanks man heres another one i did a 2 -3 in the morning lol the music got me in the mood wat u guys think? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DJ Ren Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 nevermind Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hypergraphia Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 ren take your time do some more simples and it didnt dissapear Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kr0n1k Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 naris.. i know people give you props and shit and i aint tryin to diss cuz it aint bad but you can tell your shits straight off mr wiggles site.. work on some more original shit thats your own... the first straight letters aight. level them all out for a start.. my minds playin tricks on me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 hereya go freak thats all i got for now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hypergraphia Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 naris.. i know people give you props and shit and i aint tryin to diss cuz it aint bad but you can tell your shits straight off mr wiggles site.. work on some more original shit thats your own... the first straight letters aight. level them all out for a start.. my minds playin tricks on me you aint trying to diss me by calling me a biter? youd better prove it instead of just accusing me. cause i didnt bite. ever. and i want to see one of your sketches too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hypergraphia Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 just finished it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kr0n1k Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 quit tryin to beef kid you posted in a thread thats meant to be criticized so stop crying over a little criticism and take it like a man, you dont got to take what i say and do it but i was referring to the a r and s and learn graffiti is down right now but they have another alphabet just like this except straight letters instead of wavy. as it is the letters still look similar with small differences stop trying to sound tough noone gives a fuck if you use an alphabet thats made to help teach you graffiti i was just trying to help your ass out and i don't gotta post shit for you, you dont know shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hypergraphia Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 quit tryin to beef kid you posted in a thread thats meant to be criticized so stop crying over a little criticism and take it like a man, you dont got to take what i say and do it but i was referring to the a r and s and learn graffiti is down right now but they have another alphabet just like this except straight letters instead of wavy. as it is the letters still look similar with small differences stop trying to sound tough noone gives a fuck if you use an alphabet thats made to help teach you graffiti i was just trying to help your ass out and i don't gotta post shit for you, you dont know shit no no... it seems you dont know shit... because the letters here are of a basic NYC style because if i bit wiggles S then oils too bit wiggles S and dash oh come on west you shouldve known better lets look at wiggles A and wiggles R i can go on and on... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
After School Special Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 When it comes down to it, there are only so many ways to draw an "S" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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