taiko- just some criticism... that last shit you posted.. focus.. is still not as simple as people been meanin for you to do, start with just straight letters and work on proportioning them and making them all the same size and then add to it, after awhile you can add connections, arrows, whatever and have it look good... chances are you'll have to do this for awhile before you can do something that can actually be considered a burner.. no diss. a lot off writers styles are built of a basic straight letter style