DonaldFour Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 abate i really like it. your T needs a little fixing sorta tho. Throwie. I don't like my A, i'll fix it eventually Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 That simple is better. You're being more consistent. Just keep practicing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:abate:. Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 That simple is better. You're being more consistent. Just keep practicing. my simple? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 ^I think he was talkin to me abate :P but i could be wrong .-. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LaKoS OnEr Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 ALERT how the fuck are your outlines so clean and your hand is so whack???? Just so you know ALERT is a pretty famous name. Not that you care, just giving you a heads up. Seriously if I didn't see your hand next to your work I would have told you to stop showing off in the toy thread. I'm cursed the other way where my hand is fresh and my outlines leave something to be desired. it is NZ steez they are algd Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spade561 Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 I only check back here every once in a while, and everytime I realize why that is. Most of y'all need to go back to the first few pages. GO SIMPLE! Some of y'all are focusin' too much on throws. Believe it or not, throws do have structure. AEGIS-That throw, honestly, is awful. I'm not on here to be a douchebag. Also, check out what EBA did to your flick on the last page. What he did over your sketch is simpler, and honestly better. DEFINE-Get simpler. Back to sketchin' the letters on your keyboard. It sucks, and it takes time, but you'll be thankful once you got it down. Also, don't worry about writing a six letter word, homie. I write a six letter word, and it's all good man. Just make sure you can bust out that hand quick and smooth despite the six letters. It's only one more than most people write. And at least you have the opportunity to write a real word. Not to say that people that don't write a real word are inferior or stupid, but people that don't write are going to more tolerant if it's a real word. If y'all don't care about whether or not people tolerate you, you need to get yourself in check. Those of us that HAVE been roped understand that there's a time and a place for this shit, and you HAVE to care to some extent what people think. ZEUS-Back to basics, bud. SPEC-The throw and the hand are on track. Good work, man. For real. SANK-The second one. And that hand needs some work, boss. A little style never killed anyone. But you've come a long way from those flicks you sent me in PM's. For real, those first few were God awful. AMKAH/SERB?-Everytime someone starts writing they think their hand needs to be a one liner. You'll find that sometimes it takes less time to not connect it, and honestly the hand is no good. When I started I did my S's like that in my hands when I wrote SISTINE [sEVEN LETTERS AND I PULLED IT OFF. Toy as shit, but I did it.] and it just doesn't look good. Try something a bit simpler. ABATE-You look like you have a grasp on structure and you've made up your mind on style. Work on flow, and go back to basics for a while. AND FINALLY... ALERT-...wtf are you still doing here man? Seriously, I'm pretty sure you and I both know you don't need to be here. Although that hand could use some work, but if you can paint like you sketch ain't no one gonna question that hand. In conclusion, GO BACK TO THE BASICS!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DoneTWS Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 I don't know why people dislike doing simples, if you are a beginner or a bad artist in general like me simples are the only thing you can do and not fuck up real bad. If you want to make simples more fun get some stickers and practice your simples on there, that way you can get them up, its pretty hard to fuck simples up real bad unless your me. Donald - those are some of the worst I seen you do bro, just go simpler. Abate - the first one looks good, but the painted one isn't so good. Thats understandable if you don't paint much. To make you guys feel better here is some of my stuff. Ignore the writing above on the right sticker, not that I'm good, but usually its not that sloppy. And this atrocity is what happened when I got drunk and decided to paint this in the middle of the day. (I'm hella not used to cans, I never paint usually cause I'm toy, don't want to disgrace myself) I'm trying to work on my shaky lines but I haven't made much improvement, I think my hands are just naturally too shaky. I've been told that graff isn't for me because of how bad I suck, but fuck that. I know this is lame but as long as YOU'RE having fun thats all that really matters. Just stick with it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 had this around but never got 2 posting it done on halloween Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 thanks for all the feedback guys. six letter words FTW! :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 Yeah... six letters name suck and... oh... wait. :lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 sftu. :( :D :? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 ha i feel like 5 letters is a fine balance...not to big and not to small..and being odd the middle letter can use some symettrical shit as well as teh end letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 true u make a good point. i like a lot of letters but i hate em somtimes. oh well. ill have to learn to live with em. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JakeBaumer44 Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 Abate: dont connect your letters. they arent band, i like the E alot actually, but connecting them kind of ruins the peice and takes away from the letters. definately like the letters though. thats good. Near: try something new for the N and E in ur throwie. It could be good. some shit from school today: older tag i really like: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 that hands looking nice... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
enigmatic Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 (O+H)-Sn*AP=TEAST/SATIRE Okay. Enough mathmatical snaps. satire im board you want to do another exchange? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sec_ebk Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MickeyFive Posted December 4, 2007 Share Posted December 4, 2007 Feedback? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JakeBaumer44 Posted December 4, 2007 Share Posted December 4, 2007 ^^not bad mickey. I like the colors. Mayb try to go for some changes in letter structure and see what happens. Thicken up ur letters. I like it though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DoneTWS Posted December 4, 2007 Share Posted December 4, 2007 the last few posts are all pretty decent. Freak i dont care for it bro, i seen you do better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted December 4, 2007 Share Posted December 4, 2007 DM! I was joking. I write SATIRE. Calm down. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MickeyFive Posted December 4, 2007 Share Posted December 4, 2007 Feedback? New page. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 4, 2007 Share Posted December 4, 2007 Nvm, E_B_A i wasnt get mad or anytin, its all good. I checked ur stuff out, ur pretty skilled man. back to teh forumness: Mickey the character is sick, although the legs get weird at the bottom- too skinny. The piece is ok. I mean the letters arent all the same size. I reccomend outlineing in a super fine marker or whatever instead of somthing really thick. Overall Good job. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Flowsmith Posted December 4, 2007 Share Posted December 4, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted December 4, 2007 Share Posted December 4, 2007 Boredom in chem class hahaha, is it ok? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bambu Posted December 4, 2007 Share Posted December 4, 2007 thats good... keep doin simples... fix the bottom of the s. make it match the rest of the letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted December 4, 2007 Share Posted December 4, 2007 Yay or nay? :D Sorry for the shaky lines, my hands just shake when i draw i don't know why :l Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prime Chaos Posted December 4, 2007 Share Posted December 4, 2007 Try to make all the letters straight. make a line with a ruler and use it as a guide. then erase when your done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hypergraphia Posted December 4, 2007 Share Posted December 4, 2007 that vaunt is good i know its wild and i should do some more simples but let me know what you think anyway its for a battle btw Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted December 4, 2007 Share Posted December 4, 2007 Try to make all the letters straight. make a line with a ruler and use it as a guide. then erase when your done. They are straight, its just that the paper was put on crooked onto my scanner Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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