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gimme some more pointers..im tryin to step my game up

 

As I said above, practice cleaner lines. Plus, study pieces by writers whose styles you admire/like/aspire to be like. Figure out what differentiates yours from theirs, then go from there. You've got the right idea, just need to polish up and improve what you know. The devil is in the details.

 

And practice. Nothing replaces it.

 

P.S. - bump on Skeet. Hot styles.

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Hey Q, I dig that blue one alot, with the floating kind of spirit burning things around it. Also the first one in your two picture post is pretty cool too, lots of flow and style. I like it when you bend the M in rather than have it jut out. The brown and yellow one just seems rushed, doesn't really stand up to your other pieces, ya know? It is kinda obvious you didn't put much time into it, but hey, we all have pieces like that.

 

Overall I think you got a lot of flow, but I am not feeling that E at the end of your name (I am assuming your name is Masou. Its just that little extension thingy for the upper bit of your E, just doesn't fit your style, in my opinion. But other than that dude, firm foundation, good flow and connection, legible. You can pretty much take your style anywhere from here.

 

I really like the blue one though. Actually, I think all three of those first pictures rock. Props.

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