EliAlibi

sil, why make the P 2 squares larger? also, draw lines in one fluid motion. looks like you have the DT's. and use a pencil you can erase. you can spend all day long working on a sketch, no one is rushing you, make it look good.

Pie, gonna agree and say you're a really clean painter, but maybe stick with only a couple bar widths right now. Also, you have a lot of negative space that isn't helping the flow.

christ, if i wasn't so bummed by mindless nationalism tonight, i would be really bummed by sil giving any sort of crit, and werm bumping his own wack piece 2 posts later...

sneek, the L kinda looks like an E, but the flow on that is dope. sunk, just work on your proportions and keeping your lines clean. that all comes with practice. those juniors are lookin pretty good.

nice page vims.

don't trace, don't erase. i think i have ADD for sketching. anything more than 15 minutes is too much. any other crits/ideas, anyone? Edit: Sil. you are using lined paper, how come you can't follow the lines and make them clean and even? maybe you're just not a creative/artistic person. i hear math is a valid option.

Grits by EdictOner, on Flickr[/img] exchange for yokai i forgot to post: Edict by EdictOner, on Flickr[/img]

Haven't posted pics in awhile. Some boring 9-12 minute pieces... Edict by EdictOner, on Flickr[/img] Alibi by EdictOner, on Flickr[/img]

alert.

i vote raindog.

dahr, that one is nice. throw some 3d on it and ink it up.

eido for sure. prob shouldn't be posting in the toy battle anymore since they tolerate you in the bag boy thread though.

pert gmv.

yokai, your stuff is really coming along nicely. i can tell you've been putting the work in...making me feel all lazy and shit.

the D and the P look really nice to me. it might be interesting to try with a capital E in the same style. also, not too sure about just the E's leaning.

i vote alts.

i vote for yokai.

you are neither revs nor cost. just saying i would rather see a nice handmade slap with some creativity than 1000 boring reproductions.

i don't really understand printing up basic font slaps like that. snoozefest.

pie, i prefer the one on the bottom left. umire, i'd love to see a clean, inked version, with the D a little bigger or the S a little smaller. dope though.

excellent flicks! lovin' those door shots. it's gettin' warm and chicago is gettin' wrecked.

nice brushwork one the one-eyed guy's hair. and bump the rabbit creature too.

wow, someone woke up on the wrong side of the puerto rican boy they brought home from the bar last night.... i was just saying that taking pesk's crayolas wasn't a fair battle.

relax, it was just a question.

hell yeah, i'd love a copy of that that swipe slap.