EliAlibi

work in books. you need a sketch for a straight simple? and jeg, you paint clean, but everyone tells you your letters are wack for a reason. a lot of people do "abstracted" shit, but yours isn't balanced or pleasing in any way. no diss. oh...actually. diss. nice fill, gratis. and mone, can't wait until your painting catches up with your book skills. it's gonna be doooope.

aspek did straight simples for a long time and his shit is dope now. junior has been doing simples with small variations and they are tight. (although, yeah, try some experiments now, man). jerk, i don't think you have posted a solid simple. despite what the other toys have said, that shit would get lined out in a second. way too many extensions. walk before you run.

i prefer yokai's letters, but marcellus gets my vote based on actual use of paint.

eazy

mek

shit, that's cool. i always like your stuff 'cause it's balanced and legible.

I vote KWG. Think that's 5...

alts, nice use of color (like how you used muted versions in the background). also, that T would make a dope E.

spas

you are missing a lot of 3D.

one one niner

sneek

bigger pic? from here, looking pretty sick...

i like the spikey things coming out your clouds. looks good.

mone

yokai, i think it would help if you shortened the top curve so that it doesn't extend as far left as the bottom one. know what i mean? also, make the bottom bar of the I smaller, it throws the balance off a little. repost when it's colored, it looks dope so far.

yokai, i like how you took the heart out of the O and put it on the I. I don't like the arrow, and the proportion of the K bothers me a little. oh, and the E on the throw for speak is nice. dicks, those extensions are awkward.

nice vet throwy. pretty stylish.

yokai

thanks sneek. i'm gonna keep that stuff in mind.

yeah, my colors are pretty obnoxious right now. No $ for supplies, and I have a handful of the colors I hate or dried out shit. Which connections don't you like? To me the letters don't look connected. Mostly overlapped. But yeah, I need to spend more time on 'em.

it's been established in here that crits are given in the toy thread. and was that constructive, did he enter, and have you seen his sketches? that is all.

it's not my best, also this isn't the place for crits. also, you have no fucking place giving crits, since you can barely hold a pencil.

Haven't really sketched since it's been so nice out, but here's a couple exchanges I owed people. Abys Exchange by EdictOner, on Flickr[/img] And thought I'd give a Bic freestyle a go. Shit is harder than I thought! http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6136/5938849660_03651ddf93.jpg' alt='5938849660_03651ddf93.jpg'> Grits by EdictOner, on Flickr[/img] Crits appreciated.

meh. realized after i started i was gonna run out of space, so had to use a couple lowercase. http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6013/5938296733_1367986a12.jpg' alt='5938296733_1367986a12.jpg'> Cabie battle by EdictOner, on Flickr[/img]