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sneekatoke

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  1. robot - interesting theme and the char is ok but the letters are wtf as well as the 3d... norinda - the structure needs mad work, like the widths and stuff, the random cutins/folds, the knobs, ... and watch your 3d the directions are all mixed up... both mad drips though...
  2. pos- lookin a lot better, but also lookin kinda bitten, very generic style though... omesixer- you must be a hipster with those pall malls, step your stoge game up! (713?)
  3. sneekatoke

    throwups

    knock em out rick...
  4. random stuff.. overdone frea i quit..
  5. the last one has a lip on the bottom right bar that kinda gives it a 'g' look..
  6. just stopped by to say fuck 4 loko also thats pretty dope 24k and wtf yearz haha
  7. only like the a and kinda the r for this, but heres a jumbled freak... (atek reminded me of my love for black fills ha ha)
  8. ^^ shits dope freak, likin the flow in those letters, lookin forward to a cleaned up version... heres something i did a lil while ago.. think i kinda rushed it though, especially the y..
  9. Have you tried deleting the temporary files/cookies in internet options.... ? theres also options under "advanced" tab (in internet options) to reset your default settings to IE, this plus the above might fix that problem...
  10. attempt for diesel battle, but gave up after the i.. the rest is just a random paper from work i sketched on while eatin tacos..ha..
  11. KAZ - throw is a lot better, the a looks like an a now. the k could use a little more refining, but better for sure. As for the piece, id def. lose the extensions. you also have proportion problems... CERT - yeah, man, much clearer pic. I think you have some little proportion problems as well, the e and r have skinny parts and the t and c dont really have parts the skinny... i also dont understand the r loop and think the leg should com from the loop, not the spine... CUS - keep sketchin man, your 3d is off, so are your proportions, etc. good stuff keepin it simple while you learn, though...
  12. this and the 90 min. tonight... kinda pricey but 12% abv and pretty damn good...
  13. oh shit NO WAI!!! a TOY in the TOY THREAD?!? ... i thought it was funny, too. but dude sacked up and took the hate... get off his nuts now... KAZ - you need to change your k and a man, they dont look like those letters. Id also do more simples/dont use extensions when you try to sketch pieces, do simples, learn letter structure, etc. CERT - geodude? ... i think its a ok idea for a style, but way too rough of sketches... got anything cleaner?
  14. true but who doesnt? tpbm has hemmoroids
  15. lol at the small bills around the paper... what is that supposed to say? koz or hoz? the 1s letters a little iffy man...
  16. your shit-talkin would work better if there wasnt a "view posts" button, dickbird...:lol:
  17. for donotcommitcrimes.. just real quick, with a more rounded/flat top on the d it makes it look more even. (id do somethin other than what ive done, but you can see my point) the extention on the a is just extra work, here the extention is made using the same line as your whole letter a, if that makes sense.. the b really just needs something like this, with 2 lines, dots, dicks, whatever... but with a face, it can be easily mistaken for an o, which frequently have faces in them to fill the dead space.. also, i think it looks kinda lame to use different things to fill dead space on each letter, id stick with 1 symbol or whatever for all of the letters (maybe this is just a preference of mine, though).. hope that helped some..
  18. sneekatoke

    throwups

    move to toy thread with this, i will post a paint thing or whatever, but this is just taking unnecessary space in this thread with talk, not throwups, ..ill post the the paint thing in there, and any crits or whatever...
  19. sneekatoke

    throwups

    thats not starting from scratch, man, thats the same throw with different tops.... your throw is pretty much a recycled style, which can look ok or whatever, but you havent really been writing/drawing long enough to pull it off.. the pointy top on the d is wtf, and the b kinda looks like an o, theres not enough definition in it. your r is ok i guess but common, and the extention on the a is wtf, as well as how you are doin the top curve... ...also, who cares what you fill the dead space with (although id avoid the rain drop thing in the d)... ..pretty much id start from scratch like people said the 1st time...(move sketches to toy thread)
  20. ^the instructional videos or whatever for those wave and ripstik shits are hilarious... "RIPSTIK DAVE RIDIN THE WAVE!!!" its been raining every day here for over 2 weeks.. this shits mad lame... the fuck is this, seattle?
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