for donotcommitcrimes..
just real quick, with a more rounded/flat top on the d it makes it look more even. (id do somethin other than what ive done, but you can see my point)
the extention on the a is just extra work, here the extention is made using the same line as your whole letter a, if that makes sense..
the b really just needs something like this, with 2 lines, dots, dicks, whatever... but with a face, it can be easily mistaken for an o, which frequently have faces in them to fill the dead space..
also, i think it looks kinda lame to use different things to fill dead space on each letter, id stick with 1 symbol or whatever for all of the letters (maybe this is just a preference of mine, though)..
hope that helped some..