Stotr: the r's cool man, but that hybrid aint really workin, methinks. I think with a fresh little simple s, more like the last one you posted, it would be way better
Riek: you got so much better than what you originally posted, keep doin it!! (except the sig haha)
Viseversa: even if he is tracin he aint cheatin himself, hes still learning letter structure, maybe you should try some tracin.