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hated this. wife hated it, too. (just another opinion) Leon was awesome. any movies in that same vein that someone reccomends?

PLEASE DONT DO 3-D/SHADOW, MAKES IT LOOK WORSE

ghost attachment, brobot, it happens...

^ a lil better, but write it like this MOS i dont know why, but the top of your 'o' is flat, the bottom of the middle bars in the 'm' are wtf, and the middle of the 's' is mad skinny... also, forget about 3-d right now, yours is all over the place....

no wai guise, that dick makes him totally ghey... ..it is a pretty dope throw..

depn, work on simples as well, the 1st pic you posted is alright, at least you are starting out simple...

haha my daughter loves this show... and mickey mouse clubhouse..

acquire more simples, disregard throws/extensions...

the fuck does that say...or do. post more legible pics

drinking beer, girl's in ny...

i liked that creeper more before the color, front line *and i think you missed some red in the 1st e's middle bar

Re: ANIMATED GIF HALL OF FAME SUPERTHREAD sorry if repost

1 late night without the internet an with a couple of markers... ocean: (kinda heavy on the ad-ons at the end...haha) feline: goin over old shitty shit: kinda simple: added on: goin over more shitty shit: aaannd here i knew i was too drunk:

i see what youre doing there... ...but the little spine showing in the s shouldnt be in the center bend, imo, it throws it off with no other skinny parts like that.. dope though.. edit: Jhiz, your j shouldnt have a dot on top, its way above everything else, and id probably lose the harsh curve on the z... jhiz...ha

^^ this. its pretty cool, but i dont know bout that l, s or k...

that daler is dope. i like your style, simple but suave....

the a and the f are the only ones id keep... the l is wtf and the h does somewhat look like an m.... ..def take out the bump in the L though.

lexicdys? or you were just hgih? haha... i dig your bold outlines, though...

^^solid, but i dont digg the colorway or whatever too much... and isnt it eksit? haha...

@ redeyed = he had more earlier... @ front line =... i dont know whats goin on here, but someone really propped you on that sketch?? and your n looks like an x man, try to connect that last bar at the bottom... watch your widths as well...

^^ co-signed. thats a dope sketch man... i dont think you need to post here any more...

havent posted in a little bit, so, heres random drunken sketches... an s: an o: sheisty sodem: lil stickers: weird s: messin around: i dont know..:

which one do you want critiqued? ill let you know what i think can be helped, etc, but not on all those man... i already type too much as it is!

that y on the FUCKIN SIMPLE is no bueno. besides that its pretty dope, i agree w/ freak, i think you should try some more complex stuff, your simples are always pretty clean. SNOE ... EONS.... ha... SNOE -pretty good, the throw's s is alright but i dont dig the rest. the simples pretty good too. EONS - i like where youre goin with that. the right side of the n throws it off i think though, its a lil big. N8 - try sketching 4 even circles (lightly just keep doing circles with your pencil until it looks pretty close to exactly round), then take a little out of the 1st one to make a c, leave the 2nd, add a middle bar and take out a little of the 3rd to make an e and lightly sketch an s INSIDE the last circle... finally, do a clean, darker line over the best looking sketched lines and erase the rest... that should help you a lot...(tried to make it real easy to get over the net) ENOR - moar simples

here goes: SCOE - your first one (yellow) is not proportionate. The o has about even bars, while the center bars on the s and c for example are skinnier. the 2nd (white) one is choppy and the top of the c is thick, like someone said. better though. the last one has some disproportion as well, like the center s and e bars, and the s is leaning to the left. dig the simple fill though. SAW - needs at least one arrow man, c'mon this is GRAFFEETY, BRO. but it is dope. KOTE - take that wing off the o or at least curve the right bar, it makes it look like a u. also, the thing to the left of the last k doesn't fit in, the curve bar is too skinny. JEG - you should just do simples, but if you want to know whats wrong with it: 1. your random extentions. Those bump things on the g and j don't seem to make sense. 2. your letters are disproportionate. The middle bar on the e is skinny, the top j bar is weird, too. 3. your 3-d is off. The lines go all over the place... 4. the floaters dont really flatter the piece, it makes it look worse by not making sense as well and being choppy. 5. your lines are choppy, sometimes the 2 sides of a letter dont match, for example. 6. what is that thing going into the g? It is random and blah blah blah... 7. whats up with the forcefield? It's all lumpy by the g and stuff, are those supposed to be bubbles? If so, they don't look like it. oh and not from the west coast... 3rd coast... still better than CT though... ha-ha. In all seriousness, though, dont take advice as hate, people here are sometimes annoyed by toys, but ALWAYS HATE a toy with an ego that wont take advice.