Hata - in your throw try not to hide the 1st A so much, also on your simple try and keep the letters consistent, the middle bar of the 2nd A is much wider, try drawing it out rough in pencil and build the letters up out of rectangle of the same widths etc
Rise - i think that says Rise but the R looks a lot like a T to me, just do simple keyboard letters like on your keyboard - that goes for anyone starting out