the roller is ok, but that tag needs some work just do normal letters dont try and make it graf, i mean how bad is your natural handwriting if a tag looks like that? but then i have always been proud that i have decent handwriting lol my brother has writing like a fucking spastic
Syst - it looks like your writing your tag really slowly it looks well shaky try writing it fast and repeat repeat repeat, i can't even begin to think about the number of times I have written ALTS, i have whole notebooks filled front and back pages with the same tag over and over with maybe little variations
it looks like u couldnt decide whether to do a simple or a throw to me, if your doing a simple get the proportions more consistent less throw like
coloured this, don worry about the crown it is just filling dead space lol
hhmmm a theme, i dunno just anything that you want, i can do letters to a theme but my chars are just weird things that come out of me i dont really plan what they are doing lol
but lets try to incorporate some robotic elements
yea #i'm down for an exchange, char, name whatever man, my wife is babysitting for a friend tonight so once I got my son asleep I got an evening of drawing planned
jose - try doing some simpler straight letters for now, work on consistency
this isn't too bad actually don't squash up the O so much and extend the N leg a bit more I find that looks squashed too
and I hate to be a dick but don't write Zone, I know it is hard to find a name not used but some names just shouldnt be used and ZONE WST is dope as hell just check the WST thread
work in progress, didnt take a finished pic before sending the pack to Ruck
another one not finnished
throws bit faint but everyone knows i dont like doing throws
honest crits is everythign on this page is pretty weak.
Aneks, do simpler letters, work on making the bars consistent
FAck thats not actually to bad man
yeahnation, all those little doodaas coming off the letters looks rubbish clean it up a bit
BoseOne- not sure where your going with that style
Cane - I would say that while your really good and consistent with your letters the rigidness in having widths the same doesnt work so much on the extensions, they look blocked in rather than flowing so maybe work on that, haven't been sketching much receently, might tonight
i would drop the arrows, work on the s and the k and just practise, that one looks very stiff /nh like it doesn't have any flow to it, but just practise practise