yo ving, those wild ass letters arent gonna work...try to go simple...simple stands out and then you can do your wild shit....copy like normal letters SLAY and then add your own touch to it eventually and work from there...add 3d..keep the coloring simple for simples, and you should be fine...when you do your simples post back and im almost 99% sure you will get somewhat good feedback...like my boy told me once...keep it simple, stupid.