Apostle I think what he's saying is that you need to be sketching quite a bit more before your shit is ready for this site. You're already doing simples, but sketch for another month or so and then post something a bit more refined so that more constructive criticism can be offered. Right now there are so many things wrong that it is really hard to do much else than insult it. If you've got any degree of artistic talent in you you'll know when something looks good or bad, if you think its bad in any way just don't bother posting it here. You won't get any useful information out of it.