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Haha..pen15 crew. Heck- do real quick, short strokes for your letters at the moment, or you'll get unnecessary kinks/bubbly spots in your letters like the "E" and "K" in the top picture. Do it in pencil, and never be afraid to erase. Fix up your hand while you're at it...I've saw people make decent pieces out of copying their hand when it's legible. However, just stick to the fonts idea.

The only thing that I could say against that second AMET piece, is how your "T" has two bars for a bottom, I'd get rid of the top one and let the extension of the "E" complete the "T"s bar. Nice stuff, though.

I see the R..sorta. I thought it was an N at first, too. What I'm not seeing are the E's.

Ekso, I'm with Cruel on this. Honestly, all your sketches either haven't changed much in look, or haven't got any better over the time you've been posting. If you went simple from the first time someone told you to do so on here, you'd be able to pull off the pieces that you're striving for much more efficiently. Go real simple, no colors. You're putting too much effort into your color schemes and ideas in hopes it improves your letter structure, which it only hinders most of the time.

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Kyne, your 3d is horrible. Pick one invisible spot in your piece that all your 3d leads to, don't have it wherever you think it looks good, yanno? Plus, lose that little extension shit on the top bar of your "E".

I just saw a certain philly writer bust wickets with a mouse. Sick.

MC Serch is actually pretty good. He used to be down with MF Doom back when they were 3rd Base. Every once in awhile you'll hear him on the Wake Up Show freestyling, gets repetitive, but, it's whatever.

Ekso, I realize you're trying to get into the piecing game and be good- but go at it slow. Go back to straight letters and real simple styles until you grasp the fundamentals of piecing (Connections, overlaps, 3d, etc.). The stuff you're putting down now is just a tiny revamp of your last post. You'll get better a lot quicker if you heed my advice.

Same thing here. Sucks going from great food to horrible food and not having the heart to tell their parents or your friend it sucks. I remember my friend used to hype his mom's cooking, I'd take his word for it, and it'd suck.

They used to do something like that in pieces, but it'd say two different things at one time.

Just because I think it's wrong to criticize and critique without having anything to show for yourself...Go ahead and critique/laugh at me. Yeh..my hand sucks at the moment.

ehh..I don't see all the hype with Tampa. Maybe cause I'm not old enough for the good night life. There's no graff scene that I know of- but go to that International Plaza mall if you're there, I saw Biz Markie a couple days ago shopping.

Segway, that looks a lot better than the first one you posted. Keep away from the color, you don't want it taking away from your piece. Keep simple, too- I only suggest getting rid of the little leg thing that points up on the "K".

Level 3 isn't the last level...there's atleast 4, cause I just got my ass beat 9 times in a row by "Psycho Slime".

There was a thread about this before, and I think it's so when you run a search engine, 12oz won't come up as a listing.

I think I want something else, though...more ninja-like.

Beelkae...your hand is pretty nice, especially the "N". However, work on that throw (Yeh, I know Philly isn't big on throws). Stop your R from combining with your F, it looks like one big slop. JimBand...your first bit was alright..it's got potential, but that other shit must go.

I just lost to Chupa. (analfuxor)

^ Now that you've found the shift key, try other punctuation such as commas. And I was thinking the same thing as ABC when I read the title. Pretty disappointed when it wasn't about necrophilia.

Hahaha...today I was looking at her all nekkid and stuff. I thought to myself, hell- I'd hit it...Thank you for ruining that. Wait..on second thought, fuck it. I'd hit it.

How'd you manage to take a picture of you taking a picture of you?

I like everything but your 3D and handstyle.. b+