shaken20 Posted June 8, 2010 Share Posted June 8, 2010 dope Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Vossy Posted June 9, 2010 Share Posted June 9, 2010 Painted both of these in the dark... It is really tough to tell the difference between red and black in the dark.... I need night vision goggles or something. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mind617 Posted June 9, 2010 Share Posted June 9, 2010 hsoulda used somthin darker tehn that pink to really make it pop off, the pink looks like shit next to the orange Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yellow force-field rock.. Posted June 9, 2010 Share Posted June 9, 2010 kinda reminds my of a 156 allstar.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mouhs621 Posted June 9, 2010 Share Posted June 9, 2010 <br/> critisism? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 9, 2010 Share Posted June 9, 2010 don't get in trouble for painting that crap, you'll regret it later. Learn letter structure by drawing simples. *edit - 3 years ago... today... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yellow force-field rock.. Posted June 9, 2010 Share Posted June 9, 2010 :huh: :eek: :rolleyes: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yellow force-field rock.. Posted June 9, 2010 Share Posted June 9, 2010 <br/> critisism? if i were u i would save the paint and hit the books this summer...but i dont think yer gonna take that advice so when u start painting and u finish rockin yer outline STOP! stand back and make sure everything is even how u want it...start with some basic letters...im talkiin font style an progress with little kicks and dudads yo hear me? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 9, 2010 Share Posted June 9, 2010 In that kele piece, there are serious inconsistencies in the E's that need to be addressed, they don't match each other well enough. If i would have done the outline once, then stopped and inspected it, then reoutlined in a different color before filling it, it could have worked better. First time straying from simples in a while though, kinda felt good. done in an hour. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mind617 Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 welcome back Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 other angle say somethin. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
viseversa101 Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
injenear Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 other angle say somethin. re do that red outline on the bottom, and make a few cuts to cover the sketchy parts, It'll look alot cleaner. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 thanks, but cleanliness isn't the crits i'm lookin for. That's all a matter of patience, and having enough paint to recut shit 3 times. Maybe this isn't the best place to get advice anymore... Especially on letter structure. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 Kele I think you gave yourself the best crits, there are real inconsistencies with the letters, mainly the L it is all over the place, I dunno what it is about the piece, I think it would look better with a 3D coming down from the letters rather than off to the side, and maybe a different colour on the 3D, and loose the red and green doodaas in the fill and work a smoother fill in there 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 should done a 2 color fade and worked a mid-fade or cityscape into it rather than dodads. I'll keep workin on the letters, I just evolved into those E's like 3 days ago, so they aren't smoothed out yet. Bottom rt leg of the K is whack, should be just one bar, rounded, and kick it at the end. Basically, i'll try again soon and post it up. All you toys out there, LEARN FROM YOUR MISTAKES! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VADERnj Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 thanks, but cleanliness isn't the crits i'm lookin for. That's all a matter of patience, and having enough paint to recut shit 3 times. Maybe this isn't the best place to get advice anymore... Especially on letter structure. i second that..ppl in this thread just say "o thats tight dog" or "that looks good"..nothin about fixing ur bars or making ur letters the same width to be consistant with the others..i begining to think nobody in this thread knows wtf they r talkin about..they just post garbage to post garbage and look cool on the internet..not to get crits on how they should go about fixing there garbage ass pieces..word on the streets is where it matters..not in here..get out everybody and paint paint paint..fuck the internet..rant rant idc.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 other angle say somethin. Letters look nice, lines could have been cut a little better. seems bland. Add some funk, i would like to see a better flow with your letters. Your fill is beautiful. 3d can bring your piece into a new world. Also shade a little more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 lose the thing on the bottom of the c. add some bits. other then that it looks awesome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 hit the books son. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SMOOTH_OUTPUT Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 lose the thing on the bottom of the c. add some bits. other then that it looks awesome. Cheers, was going to be a handle im told but lazyness got the better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SMOOTH_OUTPUT Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 kinda reminds my of a 156 allstar.... meaning? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iTz PaYBacK Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 other angle say somethin. hey i like your ideas for the k and the l , but they could use some changes. the main problem being with the flow of the letters. when you plan and draw your piece try using one smooth line rather multiple lines. this way your letters flow more (this a least has help me and others i know). my only idea for re-structuring e's is the simplify them and maybe let the bottom of the letter lay flat. the 3d is cool but i think a little too thick. i know you are going for some thing more complex than usual but i would bring it back a little bit just for now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yellow force-field rock.. Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yellow force-field rock.. Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 tryin to get out my old janky syle it seems like everytime i pick up a can or pencil i start doing the same U an basically rerunning some letters i dont even lik advice??? critz? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yellow force-field rock.. Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 on a side note 98% of that paint is old skool krylon:cool: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnlyHuman Posted June 11, 2010 Share Posted June 11, 2010 dope Flicks Up, anyways this my 1st piece,not that im new to the game i know my shit just was never down with piecing and i wana start doing better stuff that will last a little longer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheve Posted June 11, 2010 Share Posted June 11, 2010 3 years...for that? Kele, no offense, but thats not alot of progress for that amout of time. Do you not use paint as much? All those uptowns are fresh. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted June 11, 2010 Share Posted June 11, 2010 uptown, your fills are dope. i like the pieces better when the bars of the letters aren't separated with a complete outline. i think it flows better, but that could just be a style preference. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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