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any crits from some more experienced writers would be cool.

 

Kelo I like that but maybe the bars are too wide, I dunno the letters seem real fat, also the lil extension bits off the K and O at the top of the letters could maybe be elaborated on a bit, like rather than just being little nubs almost? but overall nice colid style to progress with I think

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alts that capn crunch style is great..just the L seems like the odd man out..cuz it isnt top heavy..also think the first chowda sketch woulda looked better with a lil larger L..seems teency compared to even the E...the colroing and inking is great in the last three sketchs..

 

good thing abt this thread...u dont consistently have to say ...work on simples.u can actually give crits...

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