Krusify Posted November 10, 2007 Share Posted November 10, 2007 My nine, make ur sketch cleaner, make ur Z more visible, and ur bars arnt all equal sketch i did, says: 1Krust idk but i feel something is wrong with it...the 3-d the letters, point out something u dont like or dont feel Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
???Authority??? Posted November 10, 2007 Share Posted November 10, 2007 Abide, Cold, Dream, Oley, Opaque !?$ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Havok Posted November 10, 2007 Share Posted November 10, 2007 krusify your 1 i dont like it ill post some new stuff soon havent had time to do much Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Flowsmith Posted November 10, 2007 Share Posted November 10, 2007 because i like your style Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heirkb Posted November 11, 2007 Share Posted November 11, 2007 bump the amoeba throw, handies, and the cher simple... neuro, your piece styles are fresh and you got solid letters (WAAAAY better than mine) but your handy is lookin a bit awkward. like, it just doesnt look natural...just practice hands more until they start to look like amoeba's, where the letters are nice and straight and wide and shit (unless you wanna go down the philly wicket direction)... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
???Authority??? Posted November 11, 2007 Share Posted November 11, 2007 Voidds, Hypar, bile, choke, inlet !?$ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my nine rides shotgun Posted November 11, 2007 Share Posted November 11, 2007 My nine, make ur sketch cleaner, make ur Z more visible, and ur bars arnt all equal sketch i did, says: 1Krust idk but i feel something is wrong with it...the 3-d the letters, point out something u dont like or dont feel yeah i know, it was a freestyle, i was fucking with some new shit_ it's no where near my actual style or my comfort zone. get your shit together before you come at mine. thanks for that throw... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krusify Posted November 11, 2007 Share Posted November 11, 2007 im no expert, i didnt know it was freestyle man no beef intended far from it, just pointing out wat didnt seem right to me is all Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
enigmatic Posted November 11, 2007 Share Posted November 11, 2007 a week old i think conjunction junction, whats your function? finally got something not so low in quality. tell me whatchya think Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my nine rides shotgun Posted November 13, 2007 Share Posted November 13, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
enigmatic Posted November 13, 2007 Share Posted November 13, 2007 OH how i missed you 12oz prophet. Oh how you were missed. By me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JakeBaumer44 Posted November 13, 2007 Share Posted November 13, 2007 Krusify: Im feeling some parts of the sketch but not others. definately like the s and t but its weird how the u is smaller and the r is a little weird too. like it overall though. Authority: someone should have said it by now but go simpler and with block letters kind of like the Hypar piece you did. Enigma: your sketches always seem rough and dirty to me if you know what I mean. I like them none the less though mayb try using diff markers. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted November 13, 2007 Share Posted November 13, 2007 Authority is a robot. It listens to no human, learns nothing from humans, and spends its time doing what it does best. Spewing shit. For Authority is a robot in charge of maintaining sewage pressure in a large pipeline. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hypergraphia Posted November 13, 2007 Share Posted November 13, 2007 new sketch criticism is welcome Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geubr Posted November 13, 2007 Share Posted November 13, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SapONE Posted November 13, 2007 Share Posted November 13, 2007 kasr? the bottom left of the s looks weird Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MickeyFive Posted November 14, 2007 Share Posted November 14, 2007 Ignore the Big Pun verse Yehp Yehp, feedback? guebr-That throwup is ill, but I don't really like your A, but it's understandable that you wanted to make it flow with the rest of your letters. my nine-Your letters have that simple kinda flavor to it yet still unique in it's own way. Keep it up Freak-You should make your painted stuff bigger IMO. I need to add colour to my stuff. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SapONE Posted November 14, 2007 Share Posted November 14, 2007 the chacter's fingers/arm look weird and the eyes on the stabbed head also look weird Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MickeyFive Posted November 14, 2007 Share Posted November 14, 2007 The eyes on the stabbed head are aligned, look closer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my nine rides shotgun Posted November 14, 2007 Share Posted November 14, 2007 critsz? if you can't read it quit now... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maviK_ Posted November 14, 2007 Share Posted November 14, 2007 whats it say :) i like it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MickeyFive Posted November 14, 2007 Share Posted November 14, 2007 Murder at the Matence? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
enigmatic Posted November 14, 2007 Share Posted November 14, 2007 Murder at the Matine? That sounds like an agatha christy book dawg. word. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JakeBaumer44 Posted November 14, 2007 Share Posted November 14, 2007 Vaunt: definately like the first strightletter peice. Shits ill. keep that shit up My nine: Like some of your letters. not all though. try and straighten some out and go a little simpler. But its good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Flowsmith Posted November 14, 2007 Share Posted November 14, 2007 and im pretty sure its murder at the matinee Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SapONE Posted November 14, 2007 Share Posted November 14, 2007 The eyes on the stabbed head are aligned, look closer. ahhh i see it now. i mistook the eyebrow as the eye. my bad. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heirkb Posted November 14, 2007 Share Posted November 14, 2007 that first vaunt is pretty sexy...reminds me of something but i dunno what...just fix the right side of the s a bit... and of course the my nine shit is ill... i wanna ask you guys a question...(haha, funny way to introduce a question) so does anyone else here find it harder to write their own name than to write other words? like, i do simples for other names and they look anywhere from decent to almost nice-simple, but i cant do shit for my own name. whenever i try to rock a simple for my own name, it comes out like shit...weird Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bambu Posted November 14, 2007 Share Posted November 14, 2007 lol change your name den Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mysticalninja Posted November 14, 2007 Share Posted November 14, 2007 i put this up at work today Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prime Chaos Posted November 14, 2007 Share Posted November 14, 2007 ^^^ looks like a lot more shittier version of this. and im pretty sure its murder at the matinee Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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