bouncingsoul Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 Honestly those pieces are what made the style haha. Like I did sketches like that before without the pieces and it actually looks different when I add them on. I think I might try that up on my practice wall Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poptart Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 the C on that SC kinda looks like a feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetus... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gonegonegone Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 i looked at it for, like, 5 minutes and i couldnt find the fetus... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pissdrunkwhat?! Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 just do straight lines, get a calligraphy book and learn how to make things flow smooth, consistent size's shapes and what makes that letter what it is. youre not going to make it trying to be all crazy, a decent writer can throw down just a simple but its got style and a cleanliness that makes it look good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mn1_fuckos Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 how bout some feedback if they look pretty straight or they suck and if they do how can i make these look better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jelser Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 the second one is bad, i don't like it at all. the shine on the bubbles is wrong on some of them. The others are ok, but it seem you're trying too many styles at once, none of them are looking ace yet. focus on your favorite and then advance on it. i like the 1st and 3rd ones best. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
big balled bob Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 era era era prospect heights hate and help thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kovert Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 dead letter is like straight letters...you know what throws are...you were kinda mixin a throw to like a regular style letter Oh ok. I'll work on fixin that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gonegonegone Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 era era era prospect heights hate and help thanks please, do simple straight letters. make everything proportional Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
big balled bob Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 era simple Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pace1 Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 Better but I think you could do with tweaking some parts of it, the middle E line, the part that is supposed to be round on the R. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unreal1 Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 besides it not being a light enuf gray in the fill and besides the O being too hidden, any words on this one @ iruleeverything, i saw you up in my area, u live near the chi? oh wait, it was probably one of the 10 million other people writing "sic" :-p just playin dont bother coloring it in, it's going to look like shit anyways as you can see... just keep using pencil and pen... color something if it's completed and it flows, not some half fast sketch with you taking hella long on coloring. and the coloring still needs work also. dont try crazy fill's to make up for no letter structure. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
big balled bob Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 bunch of more sketches of just random names i did the 1st one actually is for my cuzin that passed away off level purposely Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gonegonegone Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 ok, dont take my advice, and be shitty for even longer. whatever. doing simple straight letters first really does help, but if you dont want to, and want to continue to look like shit, whatever. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nuge1nbs Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 what do you guys think 1 2 3 4 which on do think is good and all that ish Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
funky fresh Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 i think on the 3rd one u jsut need to take the little flicks of the end of the t and itll look alright simples are the way foward listen to everyone else Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
big balled bob Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 their all wack but this one takes the cake Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swedish erotica Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 what do you guys think 1 2 3 4 which on do think is good and all that ish do your homework, kid. time for a name change! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nuge1nbs Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 i think on the 3rd one u jsut need to take the little flicks of the end of the t and itll look alright simples are the way foward listen to everyone else thanks for tha advice and to swedish erotica. yeah im thinking of a new name thnx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rectone Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 POINTERS^ POINTERS^ POINTERS^ POINTERS^ POINTERS^ POINTERS^ POINTERS^ POINTERS^ does stickers are dope...where did u get demm Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unreal1 Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 bunch of more sketches of just random names i did the 1st one actually is for my cuzin that passed away off level purposely lolll bro, do straight letters... that's more hurt then a norte peice haha. you need letter structure before you try to tweak letters, dont color them in... they suck keep sketching with pencil. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rege Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 regs131 crits please aot of bites goin on here Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rege Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 faze 1 i am defenatly feelin those stickers and the black book stuff is decent good shit keep it up i wanna see more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ValorOne Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 how the hell do u get pics on here? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doinitagain Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 feedback? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
th3_monk Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 color it yo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
funky fresh Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 rect one? kinda sounds like rectum Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
funky fresh Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 and doinitagain u shud defo get sum paint and get that shit up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
z0ne Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rege Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 changed it around crits please crave its a great start dont overlap the c and r also i think the top of the a shouldnt be to a point Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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