shaken20 Posted November 4, 2009 Share Posted November 4, 2009 thanks jecl. good work too bottom page bump for crits Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sikwit-it Posted November 4, 2009 Share Posted November 4, 2009 :F €dit: Love to get some crits, what I know: The J, U and T "need some work" (they suck ass, and i'm unable to fix it right now.. fucked up), and my fill-ins are horrible (was like the first thing i REALLY tried to color with more than 2 colors). oceanstyle :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brokejoker Posted November 4, 2009 Share Posted November 4, 2009 thanks eryone ocean lookin good, maybe bring that right bar of the n all the way to the bottom an give it less of a bend? I like it better than the other n you've been rockin tho Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 I know the sketch and letter structure has flaws but i'm trying to learn where to put extensions. any crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tack1 Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 that just is nice i like that ocean but you should take away the arrow on the o Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 like the ocean..u shudaa connected the a adn n.. also the operas oa nd p are coo 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 I know the sketch and letter structure has flaws but i'm trying to learn where to put extensions. any crits? bring your letters closer. you're on the right track. the extensions aren't too bad, but i think you should leave em alone for now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 thx yall Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 bring your letters closer. you're on the right track. the extensions aren't too bad, but i think you should leave em alone for now. thanks for the crits, you're right, i was just blasting ideas ideas in my head of how the extensions should look like :lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 also service, i think your pieces would look more solid if you added some 3d to it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RELAPSER Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 crits on the structure of this? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RustoleumEmporium Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 i cant wait to show my work! Shout out to Ocean Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZiareONE Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 YANKEES FTW Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 RELAPSR, it looks like it says REEENI. The R is ugly, fix the top and the right leg of it. fix your P as well it looks like an E, and make your T look more like a T. just a handie.. i've had writers block so i cant really sketch at the moment. says YAMIES Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 we DEED IT!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 too much going on, keep a hand simple and clean Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RustoleumEmporium Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 Jesn went over that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 thats the thing abt graff...nowadys its all abt teh flic ... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1NSANE Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 Got some of my pics, there toy, but I'm just practicing. Going tagging tomorrow night and I'm getting an airbrush for christmas! :P Just tell me if you like the style and give me any constructive criticism :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 You need to stop trying to do anything that looks like graffiti, or what you think graf should look like. You need to work on simple straight letters like on your keyboard, you need to learn letter structure before trying to progress your style cos it looks very toy at the moment Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1NSANE Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 thanks heaps! im lucky for getting something helpful in my feedback! last forums i was in they would be racist to me and call me retarded! haha i will focus on simples now :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Polyp Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 crits plx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 thats the thing abt graff...nowadys its all abt teh flic ... i completely know what you're saying, i don't have almost any experience but i'm sure graffiti was a competition back in the days... POLYP: are you still wrighting SBE? Sorry dude but i think the first letter is a C right? i like your letter structure and chopped pieces. maybe you should have made those splashes a little bigger, but since the piece is a simple i can't really talk on anything else Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1NSANE Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 polyp ya looking good with that simple, keep doin' :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 i know rustoleum, but didnt you diss that jesn? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sikwit-it Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 First try in simples/throw ups, whatever.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 Really quick sketch, crits if you want but these are just experiments Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 Shaken tidy up those letters a bit and keep working that style it is probably the nicest I have seen just needs tweaking Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wickerman21 Posted November 6, 2009 Share Posted November 6, 2009 Just a little throw I came up with. Critttsss. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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