Darkeist Posted March 9, 2011 Share Posted March 9, 2011 the sodem is nice, it feels like something should be fixed but i cant place what it is. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fatol Posted March 9, 2011 Share Posted March 9, 2011 its the camera that makes it blurry.....ill start scaning soon...i know whats coming i think, stay simple...iunno i think you can see the simple letters with random add ons....haha. im still truckin on the simples.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bitchesbrewske Posted March 9, 2011 Share Posted March 9, 2011 My first sketch with this name, writing it from now on, I know, I know, I need to go simpler. I need to learn these letters for sure, but I know the simple mistakes I made with the R's. Anyone care to help me out? I suck at this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted March 9, 2011 Share Posted March 9, 2011 parker - youre on the right track, space your letters out a little more, get rid of the extension on the R and dont connect your letters. fatol - dude go way simpler, copy the letters of your keyboard. once you have those down pat you start warping them and adding shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted March 9, 2011 Share Posted March 9, 2011 working on my throwies. may go out and paint one at a chill wall tomorrow maybe. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stayposi831 Posted March 9, 2011 Share Posted March 9, 2011 DAHR i feeel your throws! the extension off the D is coo! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snotballs Posted March 9, 2011 Share Posted March 9, 2011 bring the line that makes the hole for the R down like you have it in your A... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bitchesbrewske Posted March 9, 2011 Share Posted March 9, 2011 just trying things out. crits and help very welcomed. threw in a throwie i just did before I peace out for work. later ya'll. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soup07 Posted March 9, 2011 Share Posted March 9, 2011 Strange K Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
injenear Posted March 9, 2011 Share Posted March 9, 2011 On that parker throw, get rid of the rainbow lookin thing in the A try making the vertical line in the center of the a into a T shape. The last parker straightletter is pretty on point, keep em like that, but erase the bar lines where the fill would be. next time try having the P angled one way, then the A the other direction (just tilted), and the R angled like the P. but keep the exact same letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
injenear Posted March 9, 2011 Share Posted March 9, 2011 Soup07, try and thicken the vertical bar on the d(on the left), and keep the same thickness in that bar, but you can keep it slanted-ish. the middle part of the S should be smooth like the top part. keep it fluid and even in width. same with the black background in the s,keep it smooth. also add some black to show that the T is a separate letter then the A. those splatters are on point tho, good fill and clean border. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 bring the line that makes the hole for the R down like you have it in your A...[/color] make the R's left leg be more like the a's and just give the R a fatter left leg like the A? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snotballs Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 make the R's left leg be more like the a's and just give the R a fatter left leg like the A? theres always things you can improve. you've got a good base for your throw, all i would suggest is that you do em another 3000 times and you'll see some improvement! this is all i meant Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Gatorsinthe... Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 Throwback! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Annik5k Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 kept it very simple. ill be doing this in paint friday for an event here in ATL any thoughts ideas additions? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DRAEVE Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 mr tv more simple and no drips soup listen to much dubstep Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 more simple tv man. is that a fridge character? lmao, work on him more, thats going to be dope when you get him down. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 My O is pretty retarded....any help with the whole thing? i'll clean it up and cut the 3d off after some crits Dahr that throw looks nice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatorsinthe... Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 Someone criticize a young nigga! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 Great contribution Br0 ^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
finkley Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 Throwback! likin' the one with the octopus. i'd lose the teeth in the S though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
finkley Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 Oh and check the Tennessee thread might see something familiar. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
injenear Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 My O is pretty retarded....any help with the whole thing? i'll clean it up and cut the 3d off after some crits make the 0 smooth, with even thickness. if you want to keep the bar style, use 2-4 bars. Gusto in this piece uses 2 bars in his O http://www.bombingscience.com/images/gallery/image_1286331890_8.jpg, take notes but dont bite. also the middle part of the e is too skinny -->3 the part where my arrow is pointing. thicken that up. and with the D, make your bars more distinct. either make your bars angles or smooth, but no in between. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bitchesbrewske Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 kind of proud of that. but it does need some work done, obviously. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 thanks injenear, i'll work on it! Parker- that P is overlapping too much looks awkward, try to space out your letters and don't connect them for now, just try and clean it up a bit, the 3d and letters look rushed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soup07 Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 Parker, I would also recommend going bigger with your 3d and actually draw lines from your point for the 3d will help with consistency. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soup07 Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 Not really sure how I feel about this one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 datsik make all your letters the same size. take off extension on the k http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JwkfIqivFbM Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 Dahr you're gonna be so dope, so fast i can see it the way you progress it's sick! no feeling the swirl in your D since it doesn't match the other letters but it seem slike just a quick sketch so it's all good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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