inthecity Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 XANAX SKETCHES Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fbrisanarmy Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 go simpler, keep bars consistent Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 Dahr, for the vanishing point one for the middle bars of the H and A just make the 3D the same "thickness" as the rest of them, it looks awkward when it's so long, so just make it the same length as the rest of the 3D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 kiloz, it's okay, but I cant read it well, soo probably not a good thing, I still think, go simpler and work from there a little more. dahr, not bad, keep working on consistence, that D is thicker then the rest on all 3 pieces I think. and look at the size of the bar crossing thr H and the A you did, thivken that up to stay more consistent for now. Also, illtalics is cool, but maybe just a little too much for you to comprehend right now, straight up n down will be easier to judge bar widths. and I dont do throw ups or draw then that often, but I know yours are bad, well in my opinion anyway, lol, probably about as good as I could do. so work on them more if you like. I like that bottom bark throw. @ last pic, not consistent enoughm looks like 5 fonts mashed togewther,. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 3d work..i know its off on some letters, i wasnt exactly sure how to do it on the leg of the R. some pointers would be appreciated i'm diggin that, you already know the 3d is off, but some of your bars could be more straight, I know you did it the whole way through, but I think it would look better to keep them a consistent bar width, if you know what I mean, yours get larger as they do down. eh last time i tried vanishing point, i kinda fucked it up. i usually have trouble making all the corners of the letters go three D, like on the Leg of the R, the front part of the R i had no idea what to do. but yea ill try going left itll be easier and, well, draw a dot anywhere on your page to start off, if you are having troublem grab a ruler at first, then when you get confident try without one. anyway, just draw lines from the corners to the VP (vanishing point) then follor your existing lines in a way that follows the line of the letter but just a little out, and wham, there you have it. start off straight also for 3ds, as you get better start to move onto rounded shapes. i'll jump on my photobucket and see if I have any of my older examples, must be like a year ago that I posted on here :/ ouch, need to get some pics up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 mkissin 3d on the middle bar of the A and Hm and the top left of the A Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 ahh, hmm that wasn't my last sticker exchange, was it, lol, I could do a lot better now. These are a year n a bit old now i believe. I think it might be time for another sticker exchange freakkyyyy!! YUCKY throw ups!!! I think i'll stick to straight letters, lol. my favorites :p sadly there is no VP examples. lemme hunt a little longer. heres a VP example. just an older random. here is some ranom work, just so you guys who dont know me dont think i'm talking shit to ya, im about at your level. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 this brings back memories, my first ever piece I was told, thats heading in the right direction, lol. before that.. and worse. mad ass 3d skills. oh wait, lmao, found this, my firsat attempt at graffiti in general. under my name Skuff. skillz eh? then, porno style, ima do that again, but better. Better letters, use a porn mag as fill and colour in the rest of the page black or something. and last one for now, is for freak, i cant remember if he saw me re draw and colour his piece he made for me aggges ago. Keep drawing guys, only one way to get better. I've been drawing graf for 3 years now, nearly 2 years solid drawing and in the recent last year or so, just messing around freestyle doodles. SO 3 years or round about and i'm still drawing straight letters, learn to love them. I can see you guys are doing them anyway so that is good to see! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 YO! I appreciate all the crits greatly. Thanks guys! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 not a toy just looking for some crits... Sup satire? btw, good to see you Ruck Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 Those are solid RUCK, good lookin out. Any crits for my toy battle post? Any tips on working my handstyle aswell? like, best way to practice. Is it better to practice words or alphabets? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
inthecity Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 did this at 5:30 smasheeeeeeeed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 Sup satire? btw, good to see you Ruck Aye, whats up, cool to see some names I remember still posting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stayposi831 Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 DAZE blackbook Kade says, "i started this in english class, and ended it in spanish class" Got recruited into this shit last night haha(: New style, thought id try it out, im back(: lol crits and advice, PLLEAAASSSEEEE!:D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 That simple is cool, I dig it, except the S is drawn in a different style. make the bars all consistent like the other letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stayposi831 Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 DAZE blackbook Kade says, "i started this in english class, and ended it in spanish class" Got recruited into this shit last night haha(: New style, thought id try it out, im back(: lol crits and advice, PLLEAAASSSEEEE!:D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
inthecity Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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SheenOne Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 SAON - you have awsome style... keep it up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KLOUT9 Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 Greetings Earthlings! SAON- love that Burberry 3d ! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 SGB is good saon. bar on the D is too skinny. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 I like how ya D is the A on its side, the H is the same but with an open top, the R is fine, but that Z, the bottom bit is weird, should have extended the middle bar a little and then matched the top bar, but also I think if you angled it like you did it would flow with the R's right bottom leg, and that o is a little dirty, but it's fine. good consistency, but umm the small bars on the cross over of the A and H dont fit 100%, thicken them up to match the D i reckon. and thats the right idea with the VP, try use one in the center just down like 5 cm from the bottom of ya piece, next step is to not make it vanish to the point but shorten the 3d and follow the letters along the 3d, if you know what I mean. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 i never noticed the D is the same as A on its side almost..wtf Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 When you get better you'll start to notice things you never used too. I look at my old junk now and can see lots of areas I could have made my work better. even if it was just adding a little serif sticking out, I didnt notice at the time, but I do now. Learning about typography probably helped me there. Graphic design win. bar on the D is too skinny.agreed. on that first one, the only one with a D. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 that was towards the kade sketch. mark - use bars, even out your letters and shit go simple 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 here's a basic diagram of the typographic anatomy, search it up more if you like. the terms wont mean much to you, and you dont really need to even know some, serif and sans serif might be ones to note. it more about looking at how all the letters are the same height. there are better diagrams out there this is what a quick image search gave me, didn't look hard. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 was that directed at me? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 @ Whoever wants to read it. Not trageting anyone, just trying to help. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 Trying to loosen up a bit with some 5 min sketches and my first attempt at a throw. Needs work but crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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