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thia didn't take much time if you're trying to illustrate simples. i'm drunk as hell. so fill is all over the place. but n8, the C, O, and E are basically the same letter with minor difference. all the negative spaces should be equal. the top hump of the E should come all the way out to the leg. and your S looks emaciated. that's a much more helpful crit than my last comment. get the idea?

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oh, and for beginners, using established fonts will make you recognize what successful typography looks like. jeez, drunken typing takes longer than drunken drawing. the more you know..

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eli he just means ur 3d doesnt line up as in isnt parallel and also the lengths of ur 3d isnt 2 consistent..(ie longer in some place and smaller in others)

these crits are just finetuning shit....otherwise ur works been really dope dude...if u can freestyle simps..i think u shud start fuxing with some next level shit dude.

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