Decyferon Posted August 12, 2009 Share Posted August 12, 2009 only problem is that people who are still toys would post in there, look at BS and Pure Graffiti, a lot of the people posting in the intermediate threads shouldn't be and should still be in the toy section if someone had the ability to moderate the thread and delete stuff that shouldn't be in there then it would work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snore one* Posted August 12, 2009 Share Posted August 12, 2009 yo decy. any crits on that exchange peice i did for you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted August 12, 2009 Share Posted August 12, 2009 yea you need to work on the arms of the T they are realy skinny at the join and get fatter looks kinda off, and I wouldn''t worry about the arrow or the lil extensions, I like how the T joins into the S, kinda reminds me of an old piece of mine I did ages ago Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted August 12, 2009 Share Posted August 12, 2009 decy, any thing on mine need fixin? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted August 12, 2009 Share Posted August 12, 2009 I dunno Shaken, I would maybe not have broken the connection coming off the A going to the middle bar of the A, maybe also would have tried something different coming off the bottom of the T have it more blending into the S maybe. Also the extension coming off the S right at the end of the piece is just kinda sitting in nowhere land. You know you have good letter structure SHaken now it is time to work the connections to make it flow that is all I owuld say cos they are all individual letters try making the extensions flow into the next letter to have it all flow as one piece rather than individual letters with extensions coming off them, damn that was a lot of typing hahah Mr helpful tonight - but remeber I'm no better than you guys my styles change all the time but always willing to offer my 2 cents Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted August 12, 2009 Share Posted August 12, 2009 Snore this is the piece yours reminds me of, did this about a year n half ago i think Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted August 12, 2009 Share Posted August 12, 2009 I dunno Shaken, I would maybe not have broken the connection coming off the A going to the middle bar of the A, maybe also would have tried something different coming off the bottom of the T have it more blending into the S maybe. Also the extension coming off the S right at the end of the piece is just kinda sitting in nowhere land. You know you have good letter structure SHaken now it is time to work the connections to make it flow that is all I owuld say cos they are all individual letters try making the extensions flow into the next letter to have it all flow as one piece rather than individual letters with extensions coming off them, damn that was a lot of typing hahah Mr helpful tonight - but remeber I'm no better than you guys my styles change all the time but always willing to offer my 2 cents crits bump for shaken lol edit** damn just checked my photobucket got almost a 1000 images mainly my sketches bar about 50 or so lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted August 13, 2009 Share Posted August 13, 2009 thanks decy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nuce4 Posted August 13, 2009 Share Posted August 13, 2009 outline for Vire05 I know what your saying about the new sketch thread Johnneh but you don't tend to get crits there an intermediate thread could be for people who aren't toys but still need crits/tips from similar skilled writers I say the bible isn't just for Burners but for Legends n shit damn thats nice man thanks alot the only kinda looked bad for the eye is the bottom straight bar that comes from V and 5 any else looks very goood man. listen from i noticed theres this thread named The new sketch thread theres alot of good writters,awesome styles think im belong there allthought its to early for me i think i still dont have my own style,im only on the way to there... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted August 13, 2009 Share Posted August 13, 2009 yea man you should post in there, I iwll try and hit your exchange with some colour as well when I get a chance Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eddymaw Posted August 13, 2009 Share Posted August 13, 2009 ugh haven't posted in ages, so busy lately. crits would be tons appreciated, "attempted" drop-shadow. trying to think of a colour scheme. still hate my a's. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted August 13, 2009 Share Posted August 13, 2009 thats ok man, keep working those simples, there are so many things you can do with A's so keep trying and experimenting Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eddymaw Posted August 13, 2009 Share Posted August 13, 2009 cheers mate Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nuce4 Posted August 13, 2009 Share Posted August 13, 2009 some shit exchange for friend KEAZ YRC i know my coloring sucks >> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted August 13, 2009 Share Posted August 13, 2009 the intermediate thread is when you post in here and in the new sketch thread 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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snore one* Posted August 14, 2009 Share Posted August 14, 2009 aight man. that was all usefull info. and i love the way you did the 3d on that older peice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snore one* Posted August 14, 2009 Share Posted August 14, 2009 anyone else down for and exchange. kinda interested what you guys can do with my shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YearzOne Posted August 14, 2009 Share Posted August 14, 2009 You guys should get a kick outta this! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TsCkPs2ACMQ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted August 14, 2009 Share Posted August 14, 2009 exchange for gzoo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snore one* Posted August 14, 2009 Share Posted August 14, 2009 yearz. i havnt see nsomthing that great in awhile. gotta give em props though itd be a bitch for whoever has to buff that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Organic Therapy Posted August 14, 2009 Share Posted August 14, 2009 I'd hit them with my car. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snore one* Posted August 14, 2009 Share Posted August 14, 2009 if only you had a loudspeaker somthing that sounded like a siren :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted August 14, 2009 Share Posted August 14, 2009 lol 5 min throws also they give a credit to mobb deep=shoook ones...when they dont even use thesong. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted August 14, 2009 Share Posted August 14, 2009 coloured for Vire I like the Gzoo Freak Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted August 15, 2009 Share Posted August 15, 2009 i still got some for phere, devon, and vedo it was my bday this week an i been really busy, so i'll have yalls soon enough Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted August 15, 2009 Share Posted August 15, 2009 happy b day nigga Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snore one* Posted August 15, 2009 Share Posted August 15, 2009 yo verb is that a geso throw? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnneh7 Posted August 15, 2009 Share Posted August 15, 2009 sho is. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted August 15, 2009 Share Posted August 15, 2009 name change, piece i did last night Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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