DonaldFour Posted July 3, 2009 Share Posted July 3, 2009 :D well if you aint got no got nothing good to say dont say it, you dont got the skills to. ...just sayin:ballcap: we're both toys, so i don't think either of us have room to say anything. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PESTO Posted July 3, 2009 Share Posted July 3, 2009 i havent sed shit just posting, untill you had say sumthing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted July 3, 2009 Share Posted July 3, 2009 here you go sank... very rough/sloppy i know, if you want me to do another i will. and before anyone asks, i dont know whats up with the char either, i'm half asleep and my mind was drifting haha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted July 3, 2009 Share Posted July 3, 2009 new throwy, perhaps. crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted July 3, 2009 Share Posted July 3, 2009 like the sank negor. esp the char. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest theDRIVER Posted July 3, 2009 Share Posted July 3, 2009 i like the throw, but there is too much negative space in the A. make the center like a long vertical line or something. and change the face, that one is ghey. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted July 3, 2009 Share Posted July 3, 2009 pesk, i dig the style. and nice throws donald. deff improving 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted July 3, 2009 Share Posted July 3, 2009 i like the throw, but there is too much negative space in the A. make the center like a long vertical line or something. and change the face, that one is ghey. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest theDRIVER Posted July 3, 2009 Share Posted July 3, 2009 i smell cookies! hahhahaha. plus that bitten lip i think is too much to paint with a throw. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnneh7 Posted July 3, 2009 Share Posted July 3, 2009 i think if people knew what it was they would like it more. i laughed when i saw it. and for pesto, youre being really ignorant, and you obviously dont care about getting better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted July 3, 2009 Share Posted July 3, 2009 and for pesto, youre being really ignorant, and you obviously dont care about getting better. I think I'd have to agree with that statement... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted July 4, 2009 Share Posted July 4, 2009 another quick one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAVR Posted July 4, 2009 Share Posted July 4, 2009 ONLY GOD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eddymaw Posted July 4, 2009 Share Posted July 4, 2009 crits would be tons appreciated. keyboard simples. sorry bout the scribble shit, my lil borther got hold of it and fucked it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MickeyFive Posted July 4, 2009 Share Posted July 4, 2009 getting better syst. only problem is the bottom half of the 2nd S, and the bottom leg of the Y needs to be longer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BayRot Posted July 4, 2009 Share Posted July 4, 2009 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eddymaw Posted July 4, 2009 Share Posted July 4, 2009 thanks, lol yeah sort of got sloppy on the s. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eddymaw Posted July 4, 2009 Share Posted July 4, 2009 well, i was told to do keyboard simples for starters as my tag just to get used to my flow, and im guessing theres nothing to crit but is this alright? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted July 4, 2009 Share Posted July 4, 2009 sorry about the quality, it a cell phone pic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted July 4, 2009 Share Posted July 4, 2009 nice. makes me wanna go and paint now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abis66 Posted July 4, 2009 Share Posted July 4, 2009 another quick one. its aight.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted July 4, 2009 Share Posted July 4, 2009 PHERE, don't listen to anybody who hates on your work. I personally love the way it looks, and I probably always will. In total honesty, I'm jealous of your skill and your style. Keep up the good work, man. KELE: That one's alright, but I'm not a huge fan of it. I've seen you do so much better before, so this one isn't my favorite. Keep it up though, man. SYST: Watch the widths of your letters. Try to keep them relatively the same, and not have spots wider than that of the rest. Also, try to re-design your T. I personally don't like the way that it connects to the S. As far as that handstyle though, it's not bad for a starter simple. Keep it up. Ah, that's all I got in me at the moment. I'm really burnt today. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yinz n'at Posted July 4, 2009 Share Posted July 4, 2009 that phere isnt bad at all... much better than the rest of the bullshit in here Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted July 5, 2009 Share Posted July 5, 2009 that phere isnt bad at all... much better than the rest of the bullshit in here Isn't that...what I just said? :p Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eddymaw Posted July 5, 2009 Share Posted July 5, 2009 SYST: Watch the widths of your letters. Try to keep them relatively the same, and not have spots wider than that of the rest. Also, try to re-design your T. I personally don't like the way that it connects to the S. As far as that handstyle though, it's not bad for a starter simple. Keep it up. alright, yeah im having trouble with my t a bit but thanks for for the crit, much appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted July 5, 2009 Share Posted July 5, 2009 spent all day workin on a throwie and this is what i came up with. crits. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silba Posted July 5, 2009 Share Posted July 5, 2009 not feeling the H and the R. work on those two some more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAVR Posted July 5, 2009 Share Posted July 5, 2009 blazeive been real sloppy lately.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted July 5, 2009 Share Posted July 5, 2009 alrite thanx. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted July 5, 2009 Share Posted July 5, 2009 phere, the H and R are straight, it makes it look consistent. the little overlap that is in every other letter isn't in the P though, try it once or twice to see if it works. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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