Port-A-John Enthusiest Posted June 28, 2009 Share Posted June 28, 2009 Eddy: that shit is a banger homie..get it up.. Whats with this kid writing toomer...seriously? Dont write that, i shouldn't have to tell you why..just don't. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flying above tree level Posted June 28, 2009 Share Posted June 28, 2009 im just starting up and i know its a tad shit but any ideas or thoughts on it? some help would be extremely appreciated You need to start doing basic, basic, simple letters. Have a look through this thread, see who has a good rep and look at some of the basic stuff they post. You write Syst, yeah? To start off and to help you learn good letter structure, make it look something like this: SYST Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted June 28, 2009 Share Posted June 28, 2009 lookin nice kest! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UNH.Sunk Posted June 28, 2009 Share Posted June 28, 2009 kest maybe if you add alittle somethin' to the bottom of the t it would look more even, but other than that it looks dirty. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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OMIE Posted June 28, 2009 Share Posted June 28, 2009 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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phethead Posted June 28, 2009 Share Posted June 28, 2009 the E on the first viel is phresh ignore that characters Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted June 28, 2009 Share Posted June 28, 2009 Sick as fuck VIEL. and phat, that looks better, but it still could use some work.. your 3d is everywhere as well, fix that, it all should only go in the same direction. ANYONE WANNA EXCHANGE? :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMIE Posted June 28, 2009 Share Posted June 28, 2009 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted June 28, 2009 Share Posted June 28, 2009 reminds me of revok. just saying. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phethead Posted June 28, 2009 Share Posted June 28, 2009 Sick as fuck VIEL. and phat, that looks better, but it still could use some work.. your 3d is everywhere as well, fix that, it all should only go in the same direction. ANYONE WANNA EXCHANGE? :D the 3d doesn't need to go in the same direction if the horizom line is in the center of the word....look up perspective...that sketch and this one r like four months old btw Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted June 28, 2009 Share Posted June 28, 2009 you mean a vanishing point? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted June 28, 2009 Share Posted June 28, 2009 PHETHEAD: In regular artwork it is okay to have the horizon line be the center of the artwork...in graffiti thought, it is supposed to all go to a vanishing point, so it looks as if the sun is casting the word's shadow. Those two sketches are a lot better than what you've been posting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted June 28, 2009 Share Posted June 28, 2009 whatap Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phethead Posted June 29, 2009 Share Posted June 29, 2009 PHETHEAD: In regular artwork it is okay to have the horizon line be the center of the artwork...in graffiti thought, it is supposed to all go to a vanishing point, so it looks as if the sun is casting the word's shadow. Those two sketches are a lot better than what you've been posting. buts its 3d...not a shadow.....if i were to carve the letters out from stone or some shit and looked at them placed in the center of the horizon (vanishing point, smae shit) the top and the bottom lines of the 3d would have to go in opisite directions in order to point tords the horizon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZiareONE Posted June 29, 2009 Share Posted June 29, 2009 buts its 3d...not a shadow.....if i were to carve the letters out from stone or some shit and looked at them placed in the center of the horizon (vanishing point, smae shit) the top and the bottom lines of the 3d would have to go in opisite directions in order to point tords the horizon wrong Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted June 29, 2009 Share Posted June 29, 2009 fresh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted June 29, 2009 Share Posted June 29, 2009 that gise throw is good as shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnneh7 Posted June 29, 2009 Share Posted June 29, 2009 that viel at the top of the page would look better without the flames but still the same colorway. you feel me? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted June 29, 2009 Share Posted June 29, 2009 someone fucking exchange with me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MellowDrone Posted June 29, 2009 Share Posted June 29, 2009 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted June 29, 2009 Share Posted June 29, 2009 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted June 29, 2009 Share Posted June 29, 2009 Sank, can we exchange please? Haha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMIE Posted June 29, 2009 Share Posted June 29, 2009 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted June 29, 2009 Share Posted June 29, 2009 i haven't posted anything in so long i don't even remember what you write, but yea, i'd be glad to Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
toyguy92 Posted June 29, 2009 Share Posted June 29, 2009 You haven't posted anything in so long i don't even remember what you write, but yea, i'd be glad to fixed* no need to thank me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted June 29, 2009 Share Posted June 29, 2009 i wouldn't even if you saved my life Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eddymaw Posted June 29, 2009 Share Posted June 29, 2009 crits would be ton appreciated. i know i fucked up the y so sorry bout that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phethead Posted June 29, 2009 Share Posted June 29, 2009 wrong no im not....look at the bottom one.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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