trim dgg tsl tnc Posted April 15, 2007 Share Posted April 15, 2007 new simple any critz? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aer' Posted April 15, 2007 Share Posted April 15, 2007 Yeah, tidy the lines up. Do it in pencil, go over it neatly in pen, and rub the pencil out. And don't contrast it too much in photoshop or w/e - you only need to enhance the edges, not completely segregate them and fuck them up. The counter in your A is out of proportion, even though you've got the guidelines. If you worked on that, aswell as making sure you use thick and thin bars in the right places, then you'll improve it alot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theburgerking Posted April 15, 2007 Share Posted April 15, 2007 seriously trim what the f*ck did u do to that like it looks like its photocopied u should at least put pen. your line arnt even solid lines there jsut sketchy shit amke them solid. and you screwed up the k like its over lapping the a but there not 3d over lapping it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chubbs Posted April 15, 2007 Share Posted April 15, 2007 Fucked up O but... Whatever man i hope you dont plan to turn that essay in Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
louise2wease Posted April 15, 2007 Share Posted April 15, 2007 ha, i love how it was posted yesterday but the date on it is today's [the essay i mean] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trim dgg tsl tnc Posted April 15, 2007 Share Posted April 15, 2007 when my printer scanned the image it zoomed in and turned black and white that explains the sketchy lines.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chubbs Posted April 15, 2007 Share Posted April 15, 2007 bugs start off by getting a good camera Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted April 15, 2007 Share Posted April 15, 2007 is this any better whats wrong with it... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
louise2wease Posted April 15, 2007 Share Posted April 15, 2007 you could cross the Z if you want to make it look less like a two. other than that i personally like it... that first one on your other post [you had two handys posted i guess] i didnt like at all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheResignation00 Posted April 15, 2007 Share Posted April 15, 2007 I've been writing for about a month. Need some critssss Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 I'm afraid I'll fuck this up with a gay E so here Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idigheavymetal Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 so... what does that say? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theburgerking Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 i beleive that might be a k like the seconf or third leter but the first things i have no clue what so ever Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 bn.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal.method Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 you all must be challenged..its K N and yet to come is E W S Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idigheavymetal Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 I knew it was a K at first, but I didn't know what he was going to write.. and not too many generic start with a KN and then an E, so I couldn't figure out what he was writing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 You could if you spent any time on this thread... KNEWS is straight fire... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Craz-E Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 Louise, finally got time to post it. Nothing too good about it, I tried though *cough* TOY *cough* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ase Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 bouncingsoul..ish is looking pretty good so far man, wanna see how it turns out.. outline im workin on, i wanna put it on a canvas and hang it in my room, my walls are lookin pretty bare and the 'rents wont let me paint em...Sorry for shitty phone cam pic critiques appreciated Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal.method Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 hmm nice work, but i suggest not putting a canvas of your name on your wall..JUST A THOUGHT..cause you might as well start tagging your hat and backpack if you really wana advertise who you are. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idigheavymetal Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 The E is not proportional to the A and S. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheResignation00 Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 I've been writing for about a month. Need some critssss Bump pleeeease Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idigheavymetal Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 Neither of your pictures show up for me, so I can't give you any crits. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VILE_ATX Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 bouncing, you wanna exchange?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jet_is_King Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 bump, crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 Tell me how to fix the legs. I have serious beef with them legs Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaos Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 have u tried using a grid it workd for me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxavengeatticaxx Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 Louise, finally got time to post it. Nothing too good about it, I tried though *cough* TOY *cough* things need to be on the same level and make it more even Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jet_is_King Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 try setting lines on the top and bottom with a ruler and make the tips and edges touch it flat Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lykeomgz Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 another piece of shit.... F was squeez'd in. crits if at all possible Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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