the graff giraffe Posted January 27, 2008 Share Posted January 27, 2008 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TWINsister Posted January 27, 2008 Share Posted January 27, 2008 this is fucking ill. keep this up yo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blindone Posted January 27, 2008 Share Posted January 27, 2008 ... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phif1 Posted January 27, 2008 Share Posted January 27, 2008 Default Re: throwups - Today, 02:32 PM enemi ur e's a lil weak. yea i know shit needs to be more even Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phif1 Posted January 27, 2008 Share Posted January 27, 2008 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
booniesbomber Posted January 27, 2008 Share Posted January 27, 2008 haha what a bunch of toys agreed fully with this... but honestly, your not one to be calling someone toy. :lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phif1 Posted January 27, 2008 Share Posted January 27, 2008 idk if iam feeling that heart, Crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EpiC_EsB Posted January 28, 2008 Share Posted January 28, 2008 im gonna get my toss up soon when i get my camera back just wait :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
illstate Posted January 28, 2008 Share Posted January 28, 2008 [ATTACH][ATTACH]79286.vB[/ATTACH][/ATTACH] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T_R_O_N Posted January 28, 2008 Share Posted January 28, 2008 ill dont do throws yet..work on your letters man..that shit is nasty. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CardPuller123 Posted January 28, 2008 Share Posted January 28, 2008 Stop fooling yourselves. Have the heart to tell people they suck. It only makes them better. Do them and yourselves favors and be honest. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EpiC_EsB Posted January 28, 2008 Share Posted January 28, 2008 heres my shit...im toy so tell me anything i could do to improve Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
attentat ahhht Posted January 28, 2008 Share Posted January 28, 2008 heres my shit...im toy so tell me anything i could do to improve The E has potential (if it got cleaned up and lost the tumor-looking appendage/bubble), but the rest of the letters...especially the "p" ranges from mediocre to bland and played out. You have a knowledge of general style, but you shouldn't worry too much about making your letters of a similar look until you have a better grasp on letter structure. When you do apply style after you get structure, you'll find your letters will flow together in a more aesthetically appealing way. Try doing you letters in a straight line at first, although unique shapes (like serf's throw) are great to see, you get a better feel for your name if you can get your letters the same size, side by side...just for a bit. Keep it basic, keep it consistent...my first throws were terrible. Ill State...RT..TR?, I'd pay a little bit more time drawing some straight letters, like straight off of the bottles under your mom's sink, straight. A couple tries at a clorox label can teach you more than the style you're attempting right now. Enemi. The E's do seem a little awkward at first, but they're not your conventional throwup style, regardless...the work holds water, although I would consider banging those e's out more. It's a good legible throw, but if you want respect from most heads, you're going to want to rock a little more style. EDIT: Although it's great to see kids looking for some advice on their work, all of you should probably take your posts to paper chase in the future, you're setting yourself up for some e-geesing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PROPERTINGS Posted January 28, 2008 Share Posted January 28, 2008 everything on this page sucks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mercer Posted January 28, 2008 Share Posted January 28, 2008 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Plaid Fill-ins Posted January 28, 2008 Share Posted January 28, 2008 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted January 28, 2008 Share Posted January 28, 2008 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CardPuller123 Posted January 28, 2008 Share Posted January 28, 2008 EVERYTHING IS GARBAGE. STOP GIVING HOPE TO THESE KIDS. THIS IS THE KIND OF SHIT I GO OVER. THANKS FOR PRIMING THE WALLS FOR ME, TOYS!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
What is Beef? Posted January 28, 2008 Share Posted January 28, 2008 more garbage Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EpiC_EsB Posted January 29, 2008 Share Posted January 29, 2008 The E has potential (if it got cleaned up and lost the tumor-looking appendage/bubble)' date=' but the rest of the letters...especially the "p" ranges from mediocre to bland and played out. You have a knowledge of general style, but you shouldn't worry too much about making your letters of a similar look until you have a better grasp on letter structure. When you do apply style after you get structure, you'll find your letters will flow together in a more aesthetically appealing way. Try doing you letters in a straight line at first, although unique shapes (like serf's throw) are great to see, you get a better feel for your name if you can get your letters the same size, side by side...just for a bit. Keep it basic, keep it consistent...my first throws were terrible.[/quote'] Alright, ill take your advice. Thanks for the feedback bro im going to my book right now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CardPuller123 Posted January 29, 2008 Share Posted January 29, 2008 Don't listen to that guy, he just doesn't want to hurt your feelings. Take my advice, throw that book away and start a new one with a completely different style. That wack shit you got going on there aint going nowhere. Kill it and move on. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stickyicky Posted January 29, 2008 Share Posted January 29, 2008 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
booniesbomber Posted January 29, 2008 Share Posted January 29, 2008 we should change the name of this thread to the Douche Bag Superthread. props for helping kids out. one of my good friends just started and im coaching him along the way, that cuz i have hope for the writers of OUR future. everything on this page sucks ^^ andd as for you. you have no right to be speaking in terms of calling someone "TOY" you kids wanna learn style and good throws? dont look at this e-fame toys garbage. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keeping secrets Posted January 29, 2008 Share Posted January 29, 2008 Watch this.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T_R_O_N Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 this page ain THAT bad. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
booniesbomber Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 Watch this.. wait.. what are we watching for? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ArchOne Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 his style is completly different so yea wtv he can pull off enemi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the graff giraffe Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 everything on this page sucks sorry bro, but honestly, your throwy looks like some gang shit from a cholo who just started writing. and on top of that, the only person who posts your shit is you. Im not talking about this thread but in brick slayers. seriously man, just stop. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sko45 Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 datz a hella dope throwy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sko45 Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 that says "COPE-ONE"...and that doesnt even look like copes tags... lmao cope1????????????? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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